My story06:59 Jul 28 2010
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PLEASE DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU ARE OF AGE AS THIS IS RATED RRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m on my horse leaving the palace to get home when I’m attacked. There were seven of the opposing army surrounding me. The alley was dark and foul smelling; in fact I can still remember the way it smelled. It reeked of piss, blood and smoke from the fire lit by the attacking army. The bastards if they thought they’d get away with hurting me they were sadly mistaken. I remember everything happening so fast but to me it took hours, the first man came at me. My horse launched into the air on two legs, kicking and whinnying the whole time, but someone from behind grabs me and moves me away from my horse. They clear a path so my horse may run, they see nothing of use on her to allow her to stay, and my best friend deserted me, left me to die. Helpless without my sword, thankful these men didn’t notice it on my horse, I feel defeated already.
My clothes are being shredded as they’re having so much fun toying with me, I punch and kick but there’s just too many to fend off alone. I realize I forgot my dagger, its hidden in a strap on my calve if I can just get enough time maybe; ah yes there a little better. Now feeling scared witless and a little braver with my dagger perhaps I can take some of these pricks down. They laugh at my puny little knife and come at me again; I slash but graze their armour. Damn I’m so screwed; the inevitable sinks in as I begin to tire and feel my body going limp in exhaustion.
The first man cuts the remainder of my clothes from my body; his friends hold me down as he’s undoing his pants in search of his man hood. (If you wanna call it that!) He rams in it me, my virginity lost, I’m nothing now no man will ever want me, are the thoughts running through my head. I try my hardest not to cry out in pain, I don’t want to give them too much satisfaction. Ok now I’m screaming there is no holding back as I’m shoved on all fours hard, my head hits the pavement in a skull shattering crack, the first man is under me and another behind me. A small bit of pleasure unleashed as the man behind me licks my sore, tender, and bruised ravaged area, as well as my ass. Suddenly he stops only for them to penetrate me at the same time. One in one hole and the other in a place I’d rather not mention. I scream a blood-curtailing wail that falls on deaf ears; my vision blurred, my head spinning, my whole body aching as I’m being assaulted over and over again. When the two men are done, two more take their place and again it starts, the pain excruciating by the time the next two start the pain is so great that I’m staring death in the eyes, the darkness is coming to take me. Two more take me, my body so numb with pain and throat coated in blood by my screams ripping the walls that I’m finding comfort in it. I barely notice the switch as the last person takes his place barely conscious I feel nothing, when he’s done they stab me in the stomach. I die, or at least I thought I did.
It turns out my screams were not falling on deaf ears after all, someone found me. It was a man, I think. He woke me from the darkness as I’m dying I think he’s an angel come to save me, he asks a question I believe it was “ What would you do if you had a second chance?”
I don’t believe I answered him as blood filled my throat, all I remember after that is sleeping. When I woke it was night and I was starving, my body feels weak, but there’s no sign of permanent damage in fact I don’t even have a wound, cut, scratch nothing where I was skewered. Now where am I?
The room was dimly lit, it looked splendid. Long velvet black drapes, fine paintings and tapestries, gold bed… It’s amazing I’ve never seen such wealth. My dress is one I’ve never seen before, a pale blue, the impeccable design, silver embroidered on the soft silk, but the question remains where am I? I stand at the window to see if I can get a better view.
My eyesight is better than ever I can see everything in a new light. The plants seem to have a light all their own. Creatures I’ve never seen before are frolicking in that light, nymphs, and fairies, goblins and trolls, elves and dwarves. Every one of them are in the children’s tales to try and scare us from doing bad things, father told me trolls and goblins would come after me if I kept shaming my family. What stupid tales! Perhaps I can jump I don’t want to stick around to find out what other evils are about to take me. I jump every creature looks my way and runs. Damn I was hoping to talk to them to find where I am and what happened to me. A village seems to be in the distance I’ll go there to find where I am. I walk towards the tree, for the light of it is captivating like a spell. Its almost like I can see every cell, the very essence of it, the colours an intricate design that only nature could produce. No I can’t sit and stare I must go. I begin to run towards the village and notice that I’m running at an impossible pace. My dress flowing around me a river is up ahead I want to see my reflection. I run faster not feeling any resistance from my body or lungs the river is only about ten feet ahead. I slow down before I reach the edge; I feel my body vibrating in anticipation as I see what I look like after that experience of the night before. I look amazing, my hair soft silky smooth and the ringlets even better than before, (if that’s even possible.) My skin pale as snow, lips full and red and teeth… My teeth are white and sharp, I have fangs. FANGS!!!!!!! Oh my god, the realization of my experience being real and not a nightmare sinks in.
I’m dead really dead. I remember everything now as it all comes flooding back. The mans name was Vlad he told me I’d be ok, I’d still be me but different. He’d take me to a safe place that would be mine forever if I wanted it. The village could be my hunting ground but I needed to be home before the sun rises. I could never go home to my family. Now as for the question he asked I’m seeking vengeance, that’s what I’ll do given this second chance. I’ll track the army that attacked and rip them all to shreds as I never got a good look at the ones who killed me and ripped me asunder. I will have vengeance! I take a running jump across the river towards the village. It takes me minutes to get there a watchman is standing guard. I slow as I approach so as not to alarm the guard.
“Halt who goes there?” The guard asks.
“ I’m a lady of the court I’ve been kidnapped, and seek to speak with someone, who can help me.” I say, his sent driving me crazy, as I’m so hungry for his blood. I’m repulsing is the thought running through my head.
“I don’t believe her, she’s beautiful, I wonder if she’s married, what kind of threat could she pose, something seems off….” I hear his thoughts….
“You look well for being kidnapped, how did you escape?
Now he’s getting on my nerves I look him in the eyes and try something I’ve heard in tales of vampires.
“ I pose no threat to you open the gate and let me go freely.” He mimics me and opens the gate.
“Thank you.” I say and walk into the village. I was startled when I heard his thoughts, now I know how to drive the men who killed me mad. I also know whom I’m going to feed from… The men that are vile, I’ll read their minds till I find out if they are evil, and bring justice to those who have non.
I walk through the village my mind being bombarded with people’s thoughts, and dreams. I hear one that interests me, and follow it. A man had actually raped and murdered a young lady. He was being held prisoner till dawn for the execution. I’ll feed from him, as he’s exactly the type I’m looking for. I break the stacks that hold him, as he looks upon me, fear and wonder and unimaginable thoughts that make me want to vomit. Before he can say anything I grab him and tilt his neck to the side one hand over his mouth so he can’t scream the other around his head so he can’t move. I bite the taste of life itself, his childhood, thoughts, dreams, and all the horrible things he did, run through my head as his life drains from his body. I pull away and through him to the ground, his body making a soft thud as it hits the ground.
I look at his barely lifeless body and tell him “ You have committed a crime and have now paid the price, you have been weighed, you have been measured and found guilty.”
I find a heavy boulder to throw on his head so I won’t get my dress covered in the blood remaining in this sack of flesh. I lift and throw the bolder it smooshes his head and I cut his neck so as not to leave any trace of me behind. I go back the way I came and jump the fence before the guard post so he can’t see me leave. I’ll ask questions tomorrow for now I’m going home; back to the place Vlad gave me. I run as fast as I can, with the fresh blood in my body, I run faster, see farther, jump higher. I’m a being to be reckoned with a force like no other, I’m invincible.
I’m on the grounds again the creatures’ fleeing again. I speak and am marvelled by my own voice. I didn’t pay attention to it before but I have the voice of an angel.
“ Why do you flee from me? How long have you been here?”
An elf approaches he is beautiful, makes me feel like my beauty is nothing compared to him. His skin glows in the moon light like silver, eyes bright blue like the sky on a beautiful clear summers day. He’s topless hair black as ebony caressing his back, shoulders and ends at his waist. His muscles toned beyond perfection. I never wanted a man but seeing him made me want to change my mind.
“You are an abomination, you should not be allowed to live! We’ve been here for centuries roaming the earth right under humans noses they’re just too blind to see.”
His voice rings out like a song, how beautiful it is, it makes me want to weep.
“ Please I will not harm any of you ever. I am after evil humans who take whatever they want, and feel no remorse for those they rape or kill. I love watching you all play, sing and dance. The beauty of all of you is penetrating to the core.”
“ You are a newborn vampire, a creature who takes lives how can you say you wont hurt us and mean it”
“ I was raped and killed by ruthless men I want my vengeance. I want a truce with all of you. You have been here longer then I and I shouldn’t stop you from being here.”
“ I’m sorry to hear your human life was cut short, but we can’t trust a vamp.”
“ Is there anything I can do or offer to change your mind?”
“ Offer me a drop of your blood on this flower” With a wave of his hand a bud appears in the dirt, it grows at an impeccable rate and blooms into a giant white rose.
“ What happens when I do?”
“Then I’ll know your being truthful, you must do this every night so we know we can trust you.”
I bite my finger and place my hand above the rose a few drops land on the petals. They make their way to the middle of the rose then the flower turns red and actually speaks. “Truth!” It says aloud so all may hear.
I jump, the elf seems pleased.
“Good, you are honest tonight. Children come play again for she will not harm us.”
COMMENTS
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NavajoxTribal
14:13 Aug 03 2010
i think a little more details. of the feelings, the area of where people is at...... just describe things more. i feel thats whats lacking. is details.
its a great story all in all. :)