Light shown bright
All through the night
but no one watches
no one notices
the light that shines
from me to you
i'm bright
but your dark
dimmed
a candle bout to fade
you're existance means nothing
but yet it does
it means more
more than nothing
something
something more
means alot
I'm the light
you're the dark
I show you the light
and you push me away
you like the dark
but you hate it too
Sorry randomness, I doubt its even considered poetry lol
COMMENTS
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Grayangel
17:53 Apr 04 2010
Poetry is within the persons perspective...
You did a very nice job:)...
Silverhawk
11:40 Apr 05 2010
That's the nice thing about poetry, randomness is just fine and it doesn't always have to rhyme. You're right though, people in dark places love it and hate it. You are a bright light and you have a lot of good potential and talent to be who you want to be, but alot of things around you try to snuff that light out. They don't "see" you for who you are. I see you and your light is a brilliant new star. Shine forever.
irishvampire
20:06 Apr 08 2010
I love it it is soooo great I really mean that alot k :]
irishvampire
20:11 Apr 08 2010
I love it it is soooo great I really mean that alot k :]
brittanie
14:51 Apr 12 2010
yea it is i love it babe just like i love you
LacyLashes
21:13 Jun 24 2011
very nice