Why is that I love you..?
do you love me too..?
if your love for me will grow
then why is it that you won't
let me know..?
Would you really take me back..?
would you ever love me the same way..?
without you in my world seems black
what would it take to get us back on
track..?
Will you ever love me again..?
would you take the time
to see me as your friend..?
my heart is broken without you
was your love for me true..?
Why is it that I love you..?
I'd stand by your side
til the day I die
but not hearing those words
come from you
makes me wonder if you'll
even try..
So.. I'll leave on this note
I'll always love you
if you don't feel the same way
that will be ok
it was worth a try
but if you needed
I'd stand by side
til the day I die..
COMMENTS
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nobodysfallenangel
08:49 May 09 2009
This is exactly how I feel for him. I dont get that person by my side. Very beautiful poem.. hits right to the core of me. I am crying very hard. Kudos!
TaintedAngel14
00:29 May 12 2009
nice!
xxPAYNExx
16:09 May 12 2009
Absolutely beautiful my Sinful friend....I loved it!
VampTWI
15:25 May 13 2009
I really love this poem...it's like how I feel and write my own. Very well done!
Nightfire
11:55 Nov 29 2009
this is really good, i like ur rhyme scheme. and it really does hit home, not only for me but for many others as well. good job!
DeadlyDesire
02:04 May 08 2010
beautiful poem, loved it : )
ThistleDancer
20:59 Oct 21 2010
This is very nice. Vulnerable are the hearts of men. You are brave to let us have a peek. :)
EmberMoon
07:44 Sep 26 2019
Sad but beautiful reminds me of some from years back, hard to love when it's not returned.
ThanaNight
19:34 Sep 04 2021
Still reminds me of someone years ago, very nice.