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Why Is It..? (5/09/09)

05:41 May 09 2009
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Why is that I love you..?

do you love me too..?

if your love for me will grow

then why is it that you won't

let me know..?



Would you really take me back..?

would you ever love me the same way..?

without you in my world seems black

what would it take to get us back on

track..?



Will you ever love me again..?

would you take the time

to see me as your friend..?

my heart is broken without you

was your love for me true..?



Why is it that I love you..?

I'd stand by your side

til the day I die

but not hearing those words

come from you

makes me wonder if you'll

even try..



So.. I'll leave on this note

I'll always love you

if you don't feel the same way

that will be ok

it was worth a try

but if you needed

I'd stand by side

til the day I die..


COMMENTS

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nobodysfallenangel
nobodysfallenangel
08:49 May 09 2009

This is exactly how I feel for him. I dont get that person by my side. Very beautiful poem.. hits right to the core of me. I am crying very hard. Kudos!





TaintedAngel14
TaintedAngel14
00:29 May 12 2009

nice!





xxPAYNExx
xxPAYNExx
16:09 May 12 2009

Absolutely beautiful my Sinful friend....I loved it!





VampTWI
VampTWI
15:25 May 13 2009

I really love this poem...it's like how I feel and write my own. Very well done!





Nightfire
Nightfire
11:55 Nov 29 2009

this is really good, i like ur rhyme scheme. and it really does hit home, not only for me but for many others as well. good job!





DeadlyDesire
DeadlyDesire
02:04 May 08 2010

beautiful poem, loved it : )





ThistleDancer
ThistleDancer
20:59 Oct 21 2010

This is very nice. Vulnerable are the hearts of men. You are brave to let us have a peek. :)





EmberMoon
EmberMoon
07:44 Sep 26 2019

Sad but beautiful reminds me of some from years back, hard to love when it's not returned.





ThanaNight
ThanaNight
19:34 Sep 04 2021

Still reminds me of someone years ago, very nice.








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