my dream
17:38 Feb 26 2008
Times Read: 751
I had a dream about you last night
it was just you and me
you gently rubbed with two fingers
you breathed on my neck so softly as a shiver runs down my back
you tilted my neck so smoothly, as you start to kiss upon it
I smiled so sweetly, as if it was something new
as you stood behind me, kissing my neck
you wrapped your arms around me, so gently
I was so comfortable , as you hold me
I was so happy, as you whisper," I love you," in my ear
it was the best moment of my life, being there with you
I felt on top of the world, with you by my side
you are telling me how much you love meand I the same
you say," I hope to be with you forever, and never lose you
as I smile, for this feeling that I have is so real
I say," I love", as you say, " more then life itself"
you smile , that smile that makes me melt
you begin to kiss me as i enjoy your soft lips so
But then I have this feeling , what is it?
you stop kissing me as you look straight into my eye's
You say," I love you so much, but our time is up"
I scream, " NO" and then your gone
The only bad thing was................
I WOKE UP
COMMENTS
-
saphireblood
17:52 Feb 26 2008
I like that a lot. Very realistic. A couple of spelling errors, but who am I to judge by that. Very good.
xcrimsonlustx
05:00 Aug 22 2008
Thats awesome, your description is flowfull, calming in a way of memory. :)