The pure feeling of love. So pure. So natural. The rich feeling that all you have to do is keep breathing and he'll make everything okay.He is your protection. You are cherished and wanted. He will never hurt you. He could never bare it. His skin may be cold,but to you, he is the warmest creature alive, thanks to his soul. As long as you two are together you are okay. Just by looking into his eyes. You have everything when you are with him.
You are my forbidden fruit. There fore, you must be the sweetest! You are there, dangling by the thin stem- just begging to be picked. Eventually, my temptation will grow strong enough. I want it so bad. You are my energy. The fuel to my happiness. You are so close, I can taste you on my lips. As soon as I sink my lips into your spirit, I will never let go of it.
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Very nice.
love it.....this reminds me of someone ^_^
certainly reminds me of someone! lol
~W~
A very sweet poem.I loved poetry,It's like a hidden gateway to the soul and heart.
One rainy afternoon. I decide to take a walk. Not so much decide as my heart decides for me. I mindlessly walk into the dark, thick forest next to my house. I walk for hours, never looking back to see how far i've gone. Though i'm looking at my feet, clutching my stomach, I don;t really see the world under my dirty sneakers. Suddenly, I trip and fall on my knees, ripping the knees of my jeans. I can't even feel the pain as my warm blood starts to flow out, forming a shallow pool around me. Then, he appears. He crouches down in front of me and pulls me off the soaking- wet dirt. He pulls me against his bare chest and we share the most passionate, meaningful kiss ever possible.
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A way with words dear,
Very creative with your writing.Loved It.
Listen to your heart. It's the only thing yo have left after your dreams have been torn apart. though it may break, it will always repair itself just for you. You may feel abandoned, but don't waste your tears. Just know that they were wrong. Go. Be free and don't lose sight of who you really are.
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Ah nothing like a heartbreak to Inspired you to write.Most of my poems are Inspired after that.A very sweet poem.
You may call me a drama queen, but i'm so much more than that. Do you know what it's like, to have your heart torn out and thrown around like a ball? I do. Do you know what death is like because there have been moments you've barely made it through, and your only gurantee is that the sun will rise tomorrow? Guess what- I do. To be taken advantage of? To have absolutely nothing? No one really cares! Adults always say that they can relate to us- yeah, well good luck! Things are always different for every one of us. Many forget that. Yeah, maybe you're right. Maybe I am a drama queen; but that's definitely not all.
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most that they call drama queens are just those that emotions mean something to. those that can open their hearts, and find something in this life beyond just get up go to school/work live and then die.
the drama queen is the one that glories in love...the drama queen is the one that can actually say the words "i love you" and have it mean something.
heres to the drama queens...
id rather have drama than tedium any day.
~W~
Loved It very nice.
A deep, burning passion for each other. They don't know each other, yet they are connected. Not explainable, and nearly impossible.
they wonder when destiney will bring them together. This is dangerous, but both want it so bad. Both have vowed to do whatever it takes to be with one another. They have both been suffering. Every day it drags on. Both die a little more inside. They need to save each other, or neither will ever make it.
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I can relate so very much to this poem that It's not funny.I daydream all the time about my princess.I've been with a lot of girls,but have yet to find that 1 that will be true to me and only me.
This is dedicated to my grandpa, and the only one I ever got a chance to meet. He served in our army and died three years ago from heart disease. original date- 8/29/07
Hi, Grandpa!
I miss you. Grandma talks about you so much. I never forget you. None of us ever will. What's heaven like? I'm sure it's great. You deserve the best, after all. I'm starting highschool in exactly
one week! I can't imagine taking such a big step, but, i'm gonna try my best for you. Thanksgiving hasn't been the same. Everybody misses you; and your smile. Nothing has really been the same. Things are changing so fast. I will see you again some day. I miss you, and I love you. Hey, look! two things that will never change!
Love, Sonjie
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Touching
A sweet and sad poem.I wrote a poem about my mom when she passed away In 2001 of a massive heart attack.I'll have to find It and post It on here.
This day has brought new understanding. I'm on my way towards you. I will get there. I know you'll be waiting with open arms, and i'm coming to fill them.
Tonight, I'm falling apart. I need you more than I need the air floating around me. I keep having tremors. I'm being tortured. Please. make my pain go away. I believe in you. I can't sleep, no matter how bad I want to dream about you and me, in our special place. I crave to be like you so bad. To leave my entire life behind for being with you. I am using my energy up so much quicker than I thought possible. I need you. I crave you. I love you.
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You write from your heart like I do,the best way to write too.Loved It.
I am your worst enemy and your best friend.
I am your touturer and your lover.
I will slap you across the face, ill give you the best kiss of your life.
you're a jerk, but you're my jerk.
Ill make you cry, ill make you laugh.
Ill shoot you, ill lick your wound clean
I'm your devil, i'm your angel.
I hate you, I love you.
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The bittersweet feeling of love,It can make you happy and sad.And It can drive you nuts too.lol
the very living of something is so incredibly vital, it is not for the shallow or faint- hearted. the burning passion of the fire will never be healed, not even weakened. Many try to enter my secret chamders, but only one will be able to really capture me.
A dark, candle- lit room. The candles, pure, and cream- colored. The exact tone of his skin. Blonde, with a 5'o clock shadow. His shirt off, he smiles, with the softest blue eyes. Slowly. He walks toward me. A passionate kiss, we share. His perfection makes my hert skip a beat. Like an angel would be jealous. He holds me against his chest, and whispers, "you shall never hurt again".
A misty day. she is off beat. no one understands. She is mocked, laughed at, until she discovers the power. The deep, burning soul that is hiding behind the mask. Something so beautiful. Radiant. Truely magical, just waiting to come out wild and free, like a stallion. Unlimited, we will someday, soar together.
Every day, I wish. Every day I hope. Every day I feel. My heart leaps at so many things, but is always torn out by a million more. I will stay strong. you can't pearce the lioness shield, and you can't pearce me forever. I can only use this if I have someone to travel the journey with. Who?
A mother unicorn, as white as fresh snow; with her two colts, she dances through a small pond, under a mystic moon. The three gallop up to a beautiful castle, where a warrior princess awaits them. the girl smiles, and they all ride off into the night.
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Unicorns are 1 of my fave creatures,next to the mermaids.Lovely poem.
How do you catch a falling star when it's a thousand miles away?
Follow your hopes, dreams, love, and most important of all, your heart!you will get there, no matter what anyone says.
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The desperate need I have for you can never be contained. I search for you. Come to me, take what ever part of me you wish. Just know that you are now an entire half of me.
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Wow your writing Is good.I'll have to read your other poems later on.But for now I've business to do on the web.
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LordWolf
03:15 Mar 11 2010
hmmmm
anyone we know?
lol
~W~
darksurfer1969
00:47 Feb 27 2011
A very nice poem loved It.I write poetry too.It's In my journal.I need to add more stuff to It too.