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Castle

02:17 Apr 20 2010
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She was about eight... a daughter; innocent to the entire world.

She was called Juliet.



Juliet moved to a lifeless town, listening to a king and queen fight every night- putting the family under a happy mask by day.

But Juliet knew that there had to be more to life.



If truly not, she was going to create her own world.

And that is just what she did.



One day, she was playing in the backyard. The queen told her not to ever go into the woods, but Juliet was somewhat of a rebel.

She took one step, and then another.

The deeper she went, the darker it grew.



It appeared to be almost completely dark, when she heard a snap behind her. She spun around. This movement caused her to glance at her hair, which had become almost black from it's original honey blonde color.

She noticed she was much taller and smarter than any eight- year- old. Juliet was about seventeen now. She wore a velvet dress that covered her feet, but allowed just the top of her new breasts to peer out.

She heard another snap, and called into the night- "who's there?"

Most would be frightened, but she knew better.



She kneeled, then closed her eyes.

She felt a presence come in front of her, then another behind her.

four hands layed gently on her shoulders, as if to caress her.

She opened her eyes to see familiar silouhettes.



One was of a tall man; perhaps around thirty years of age. She knew he was tall- even from a kneel. He stood proudly in front of her.

A woman- in her twenties- stood behind her. She was absolutely beautiful.



Juliet stood to see them better, though she had seen their faces many times in her dreams.

The three ran together, never to return to this horrid place.

They were finally together again.



*The point of the story was to practice on my description. Yes, im aware of the sbrupt ending- I wanted it that way!*


COMMENTS

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LordWolf
LordWolf
02:51 Apr 21 2010

sounds like a happily ever after to me!

~W~





EntwinedxHeart
EntwinedxHeart
20:44 Apr 21 2010

A Beautiful, Mystical Fairytale ^-^



xSx





martin
martin
06:16 Apr 22 2010

cool little story ... very clever








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