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sonnet

16:42 Feb 19 2009
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Wicked Time



Looking at the clock it laughs at me

Why torture me ticking away my time

Every minute every hour my life dwindling away I see

This is why I write the rhyme

The clock ticks idly on the wall I want to tear it down

Scream and break it as it has done me

Sitting at the deask looking round

Another time another day another place id rather be

The cold breath of time creeps down my spine

Like falling in a ice cold river taking my life

This time should be mine

But yet it hovers over me taking away my time to be a good wife

I feel time bearing down upon me as my life slowly fades

The ice cold clock ticks away and I feel the flesh ripping time blades

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nosferatu420247
nosferatu420247
18:58 Feb 20 2009

awsome poem lette :)






deathangelsdarkrose
deathangelsdarkrose
01:17 Mar 12 2009

cool peom :}





BerBer369
BerBer369
04:48 Mar 12 2009

This is so very very good.

I love it much!

I am Amber and I think that your writing is..... Beautiful!!





YourDeathAngel
YourDeathAngel
05:23 Aug 24 2009

i like it very much








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