If time is truly on our side than how come it ticks away our lifes?
does it tick just out of spite or is it's reason more humble?
well for what ever the reason of the clocks power to absorb life hour upon on hour know that i'm a timeless soul with no use for time at all
A angel is what i used to be flying so free and high.
then you fucking shot me and left me to die.
why did you do this apart from being jealous?
obviously you'r heart is black and on a rope must be hard to have a swinging brick in you'r chest and very little hope.
oh well i'm dead in plain veiw.
but you'r dead on the inside and nobody can ever save you. so let this be a lesson that before you shoot down a angel think first if he can save you!!
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Very nice Spike @{~
i like, it inspires me
WOW!!!!!!!!! that is so good.
so you'r the one who did that.
it was sick don't fucking laugh
move that smile from off you'r face.
or you'r blood i shall taste.
you'r the one who's idea it was.
to hurt another without good cause.
you'r not nice my twisted friend so to you'r life i put a end
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I really like this , this shows ur fangs @}~
Very Good Writing.
the air that passes through my slit dry lips is a reminder of a more favoured time
the cold chill of the bitter wind is a antidepressant at this less favoured time
the tears that i once could shed are well and truly...gone
work it out go on...reck WAIT no no search for a answer here look close
too late i've already jumped
but atleast there is neither favered or unfavered times ahead just....the wind
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Intwined in my glare is you'r lusting stare,but all what ashame that i have little love to spare.
it breaks the bank for me to love myself.
so what gives you a chance in hell.
if i could love you i truly would
so find you'r prince somwhere else.
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You write beautifully Spike :)
Very Good hun.
judge me hate me kill me inside.
i don't need you'r love to survive.
a whisper from a sweet old dream might make my life stronger at the seems, but nothin could ever make me feel stronger than to bleed.
so now you can relate on my loss of blood.
so why do you love me when i'm covered in mud SO DEAD!.
from when you JUDGED me HATED me and KILLED me inside.
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This is a good poem and one filled with emotion. I do not Judge you, I do not hate you, I will not kill you inside. Hope you have a great day.
A fight worth fighting.
A skin worth peelin.
why can't we tie down the torso of war and start with the healin.
I've paced now back and forth wondering why i fight you'r force? was my last words to quick to say i'll live now,feed now, and take you down another day.
i'll be a rampage on you'r soul to rid you'r hatrid once and for all.
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I like your writing style, would love to read more. I have added your journal:)
That is very good. You are a good writer of poetry.
cherish me in you'r embrace.
i could'nt live without you'r scent you'r bitter sweet taste.
you'r heart so rapid to quick to slow.
that thy is the enemy of you'r control.
so take me and let me bite.
dance with me oh dance we me the lovers dance that rules the night.
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You have a poets heart, I love this poem again so much emotion has spilled out of your heart and onto paper, Thank you for sharing. I hope you have a great day. Look forward to reading more.
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AzrakWorod
21:13 Dec 11 2010
WOW!!! Cool hun.