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I can still taste your soft lips upon my cheek,

Oh such fairness, my desire still not quenched,

Upon thoughts of you, all flames are now relit,

I cannot stop it, that raging passion,

Unable to go down.



It hurts, the intensity, not marred by old protests,

Half true, flirty protests of a cheek we have forgotten,

I remember the feel of those long deep nails,

Those dark, tearing pincers in my skin,

That raises ruby gems upon my pall.



But that pall does soften at the hot trace of your tongue,

A flickering wet mass of incredulity,

A moaning, groaning of ecstasy,

Edged with the dim gasps of pain,

Of loss and of loss loosing spirit.



I am lost to you, in you as I recall,

My mind enacts all that I lost, hoped and feared of you,

That demon of depth you gave unto me,

A passion so intense it through aches of intense,

Daggers of heat, and blinded to reality,

I relive.



Oh that my fantasies reign

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captainglobehead
18:28 Nov 04 2010

Very, very impressive.

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Sweet as your gentle kisses were I cannot recall,

For now my sweet, keep naught white but my pall,

Listen not to my ghost who haunts mens eyes,

But whisper to me now, whisper your goodbyes.



I have nothing more to give but my holder,

Do not keep our flame alight, please let it smolder,

We can be no longer, just you and only you,

It is fair and denying that, would be untrue.



Never wonder, never dream of being bound again,

My mind has gone, for I am bane,

I wish it were different but my sweet,

I dare say never once more shall we meet.



I hold to you my candle, it's flame is weak,

Let it keep alight, let naught drop nor leak,

Understand my wishes, and put your heart at rest,

I love you deeply, let me end my quest.

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MasterShenkins
00:19 Oct 22 2010

Some very nice poetry :) what first seems like it is going to be simple is actually a little harder to work out and it's clear you've thought about it. Some very honest work.

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rawrrbittentwice
13:27 Oct 23 2010

thankyou i thought it would be best to keep them simple for to complicated would make them loose there essence

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