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Burn Marks

01:02 Jan 26 2009
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You catch me now in a time of complete panic. Being held down by someone you love is something that you will hopefully never have to go though. It was happening and the man I thought would never hurt me was holding me down. While i screamed and punched he kept tawnting me with his sharp fangs. As I was seeing my life flash before my life his fangs pierced my neck. At that moment my body went limp in his arms and a feeling of complete peace sweep over me. Before I knew it I was flying up into marble clouds were everlasting life was in the distance. Then I was falling through layers of the Earth toward were I knew was not heaven but the complete opposet. As fire burned at my soul and the feeling of being ripped apart consumed me a lasting scream slipped though my lips then there was only silence. For all the other screams blocked out my own as all dirty souls would be tortured for all eternity.


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ravenscar
ravenscar
00:19 Jan 27 2009

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site!!! YEAH!








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