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Remembering and Forgetting

20:37 Sep 03 2008
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I stopped crying yesterday

That hollow pain does not fade

Yet it no longer hurts to feel it

It will always be part of my heart

I have still learned to smile again


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Breaking Spirit

18:46 Sep 03 2008
Times Read: 675


Rage

I am the lost temple

House of the cold fury

Walk within these walls

Hear the sound of calling

Near to your own soul

Coming from in your heart



Hollow

I am the something that is nothing

A void to fill the space

Try to hide me all you can

The pain you feel every day

Consuming the hope of dawn

Product of a broken heart



Despair

I am the last breath

The call for what will never be

Cry me out into being

The last hope that gave way

Filling up your heart and mind

When nothing can ever save you


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Joli
Joli
04:50 Sep 08 2008

Strong piece...I love the opening metaphor:

"Rage

I am the lost temple

House of the cold fury

Walk within these walls

Hear the sound of calling

Near to your own soul"



It's getting more and more enjoyable to peek in here to see what you've been writing.








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