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5 entries this month
 

22:56 May 29 2008
Times Read: 680


Piercing through my heart

Twisting in my soul

Longing for the lost

Pain swelling with frustration

Hollow burden fading

Exalting in the gain

Soothing joy and comfort

A void filling hope


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04:19 May 22 2008
Times Read: 697


Hurray! Hurray!

Today's a good day!

Do you know why it's so good

That I should

Go running about

And then shout?

Today has come and I'm alive!

That's my only drive



I wrote this a few years ago while sitting at school, to this day I still don't know what inspired it. I wasn't really in a good mood that day even and yet this is what came from the end of my pen. Ehh... *shrugs shoulders*


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23:08 May 21 2008
Times Read: 706


The cat and the dog float out of sight on the river

Look and don’t be fooled by the eye’s slick tricks

See through it all and see what is the true truth

See that they are floating away on the river Styx



Our weaknesses sneak in and steal away our hearts

They take us by the hand and lead us to our pain

Lies and deceptions that we tell to fool ourselves

Foolish attempts at a false happiness all in vain



We’re living in a reality we can’t afford to keep

Hiding from the truth of our sins in a fantasy

The world falls and crumbles from our denial

The souls of Men slowly fade away in ignominy



Hold up

Give up

Walk away from unreal

Wake up

Stand up

Reclaim what we are


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Joli
Joli
23:52 May 21 2008

"These two lines are brilliant and evocative. They captured my attention immediately."





placidchaos
placidchaos
03:56 May 22 2008

Wow, thank you, I don't think anyone's ever referred to any of my writing as brilliant before!





Joli
Joli
03:06 May 24 2008

"The cat and the dog float out of sight on the river

Look and don’t be fooled by the eye’s slick tricks"





These were the 2 lines I meant to quote.





 

03:25 May 11 2008
Times Read: 719


I look into her eyes

Desire

I kiss her lips

Hunger

I feel her skin

Lust

I hold her tight

Ecstasy


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03:23 May 11 2008
Times Read: 721


A beautiful smile

Like refreshing summer mist

Hope for the hopeless


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