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Soft breeze teasing cold

Silent sighs of Winter Night

Mistress of sad hearts





I tried to turn this into a renga or at least a tan-renga but in the end I think leaving it as a haiku is best. Below I post what wrote in the attempt of turning it into a renga:



Soft breeze teasing cold

Silent sighs of Winter Night

Mistress of sad hearts



Pressed back by coming twilight

Giving forth to paltry dawn



Winter Day stands tall

Master of the troubled mind

Good and harsh teacher

The path that I was walking down slipped away from me

I turned to find where I'd been but only forest could I see

I would say that I lost my way but what you don't have you can't lose

There's no trail to guide my feet, just a direction I must choose

I don't know where I will go and I'm not even sure I care

Where ever I end up it's a sure bet that I willll be there

Don't hold your breath or count the days, just let me take my time

It doesn't matter how long it takes I know that I'll be fine

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Joli
07:59 Dec 20 2008

Love:

I would say that I lost my way but what you don't have you can't lose

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Impudently dedicated to Joli. Thank you so much for indulging us.



What can I put upon this page?

What words should I use?

Would it be proper to lay my mind bare?

Should I open my soul for searching eyes?

I have no thoughts worth searching

I have no secrets worth knowing

I do not write of these things

What I offer up to you is nothing great

Yet I ask you to accept these from me

My pain and my pleasure

My distaste and my desire

Not what I feel but what I am

A never ending search for peace

The last breath exhaled for eternity

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Joli
05:46 Dec 13 2008

Wow. I peeked in here and found this. Wow. I had a tough day today. This was the treasure I needed at the end of my day. Thank you SO much!

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placidchaos
04:33 Dec 14 2008

^_^

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