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15:47 Dec 07 2007
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As Dan kneeled there, watching Jalina die, he could not contain the anguish that swept over him. He leaned over her weeping and heard her whisper, "The last thing I shall ever do" and with that she sunk a dagger into his heart.



"Ha!" Dur Rian scoffed, "She was so bitter that in her last she struck at the one person who could ever have loved her, killed him!" He walked away laughing as Dan collapsed.



Adan kept thinking to himself, "Why, why did she do it?" Then he realized something was wrong, it didn't hurt. In fact, he didn't feel his life fading, it felt stronger. That's when he realized and said, "Thank you my love." Then, biting his lip to make it bleed, he kissed her. Standing up he pulled the dagger from his chest and grinned as the wound healed. "Dur Rian, as the mortal Dan I was nothing to you. Now, are you ready to face Dur Adan?!" Dur Rian turned around to look as Adan started to transform. His blonde hair fell and grew back jet black, his eyes turned an emerald green, his ears became pointed, and his canines were replaced with fangs.



Dur Rian looked at him in shock, "It can't be, Dur Adan is dead!"



"No, not dead, but dying. I was trapped in mortal form, but she has set me free. And now, I shall take vengeance upon you!" A black flame engulfed him, then it all gathered in his right hand in the form of a sword. Looking at Dur Rian he rushed forward, striking at his heart.


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