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empty feeling

17:27 Jul 25 2009
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an empty feeling

and a lonely heart

this is what i end with

and it is how i start



emotions rage

rending me in two

i destroyed my cage

gave my heart to you



its time to hate

to replace that love

how did you frustrate

with a single shove



you touched me deep

deeper than i care to admit

damp tears and darkness seep

and you tell me to sit



you say grow up

and now that i did

you left me with an empty cup

you left me nolonger a kid



you are the pain

that coarses through me

like blood through vein

now you left me


COMMENTS

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DeadHeir
DeadHeir
17:31 Jul 25 2009

oh, good ending.

and good flow, all the way through, too.



not to mention, it delivers a message that i am sure many people can connect with...



good write :)

i like it





TrailorBoy
TrailorBoy
19:06 Jul 29 2009

Well one



I like it





wolfblade
wolfblade
20:02 Aug 08 2009

i kno the feellin





pain
pain
21:36 Aug 29 2009

i see.





sippa
sippa
02:13 Sep 12 2009

what can i say

sometymes love just bytes








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