an empty feeling
and a lonely heart
this is what i end with
and it is how i start
emotions rage
rending me in two
i destroyed my cage
gave my heart to you
its time to hate
to replace that love
how did you frustrate
with a single shove
you touched me deep
deeper than i care to admit
damp tears and darkness seep
and you tell me to sit
you say grow up
and now that i did
you left me with an empty cup
you left me nolonger a kid
you are the pain
that coarses through me
like blood through vein
now you left me
COMMENTS
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DeadHeir
17:31 Jul 25 2009
oh, good ending.
and good flow, all the way through, too.
not to mention, it delivers a message that i am sure many people can connect with...
good write :)
i like it
TrailorBoy
19:06 Jul 29 2009
Well one
I like it
wolfblade
20:02 Aug 08 2009
i kno the feellin
pain
21:36 Aug 29 2009
i see.
sippa
02:13 Sep 12 2009
what can i say
sometymes love just bytes