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it slowly cut in

as it send me to in to spin

as it runs down the page

sending me to a stage

when I look at my work

as I try to perk

seeing the blood spilled on the paper

when I look down as my draper

with the blood on my cloth

as I begin to froth

as I pull out the dagger out of my back

then I fall down and smack

my head on the table

I feel then unstable

then I go to the floor

as I stare at the door

the vision fades

then I look at the spades

on the wall

after the fall

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Leinth
07:47 Apr 30 2009

gripping, visual and very well written!!

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RavenLucifera666
22:26 May 20 2009

very creative.

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evilsandwich
10:22 Jun 23 2009

wow so graphic,

i loved it ^-^

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