ETERNAL LOVE…..TAINTED PAIN
It is a night of dark desire…..a song of ethereal pain,
Where wolves vent their howls….waiting for some loss to gain,
The beautiful one,awakes her darkness,
And shrouds her gaunt form,
Still lurking and wanting over her lost love.
Her raven hair…..cascades over her fragile milk-white shoulders,
And her full deep crimson lips part slightly,
To taste the red tears streaming from the pale flesh beneath her,
Now the night of ecstasy…I smile vaguely.
COMMENTS
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bloodface
19:18 Sep 11 2009
excellent poetry!!! 10
Lykeros
20:40 Sep 11 2009
very good
Ladydarkklord75
06:53 Sep 14 2009
A 10
LordLothanius
07:52 Oct 06 2009
bravo very well writin.
Lordpeace
10:07 Oct 06 2009
interesting
superbeast
05:10 Oct 14 2009
Beautifully dark and erotic.
DiamondDragon
01:04 Oct 23 2009
beautiful, sensual
Karma
14:11 Mar 17 2010
Leaves me with a feeling of Dejavu, emotionally familiar. Nicely done.
ShyVampire
05:12 Apr 12 2010
you give the characters in your mind a face, which i like... it makes me thirst... heheh
GawianoftheCrows
16:03 Apr 22 2010
nice
WaitsForTheMoon
14:26 Jun 03 2010
i like it