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Thank you ....

22:44 Dec 30 2007
Times Read: 549


A Big Thank You to Darkwolf, Billythejust and Artemka for getting my book into the database.. Thank you so much.. :)


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I give up!!

16:51 Dec 29 2007
Times Read: 562


I've tried a dozen times to get my book into the database and yet it still won't work.. I don't know why because it is a vampire book,, I'm just so not liked....... O well,, I give up!


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Excited ...

21:03 Dec 22 2007
Times Read: 566


I am very excited,, I got the first few chapters back from the screenplay writer on my book Vengeance Comes,, it looks awesome. He is doing a kick ass job and I really believe that it will be a big hit on the big screen.. I am going to post just a lil of it so you can have a taste.. Keep in mine that this material is copy written, if you try to steal it there will be legal action taken not just from me but from the production company as well,, and although I am not allowed to say which production company that is at this time,, I will warn you it is a well known one.... Enjoy the material and comment on it if you wish..





Vengeance Comes

By

Screenplay

by

Eric Feliciano

Story

by

Victoria Rose,

Eric Feliciano

Based on the novel:

Vengeance Comes

by

Victoria Rose

Copyright 2007-2008 iZwe Eric Feliciano

Entertainment (614) 832-6206

ericfeliciano@hotmail.com





EXT. - NIGHT - IL CAMPO DI DOLORI

A large army led by a fierce leader marches onward during

the foggy early morning hours. The sun has yet to rise so

only the moonlight lights their path. Many men on horses

followed by thousands more on foot make their way to the the

battlefield known only as Il Campo di Dolori, "The Field of

Sorrows". We see the sub-title of time and place: "Italy

1492". Lord Marco Giavani, the ageless leader of this army

with long dark hair and piercing eyes, sits upon his horse

along side General Nameless, a young, well-groomed man in

his late thirties. Both sit in silence staring out at the

now empty battlefield. Their silence is broken by a young

Scout riding up to them on horseback.



SCOUT

Sir! The men are in place! We

await your orders, my lord.

Lord Giavani remains staring silently at the battlefield.



FLASH BACK TO:

INT. - DAY - GIAVANI ESTATE

Lord Marco Giavani is sitting in a large thrown-like chair

in front of an over sized fireplace deep in thought. The

room is dark, except from the lighting that the fire burning

within the fireplace provides. General Nameless pushes open

the giant heavy doors to Giavani’s office.



NAMELESS

They are here, sir.

Giavani remains motionless.



GIAVANI

I know.



NAMELESS

They have leveled towns and wiped

out entire family lineages.



GIAVANI

I know.



NAMELESS

What would you have us do, my lord?



GIAVANI

We must fight.

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: 2.



NAMELESS

But sir... It is said that this

army comes from the pits of Hell

itself. It is said that they are

the damned. They have erased entire

armies from the face of the earth

in a days time! We will lose

thousands if we fight!



GIAVANI

You dare to question my authority,

old friend? We are like David...

Our Goliath awaits us.



NAMELESS

Sir, I’ve fought countless battles

beside you and would die a thousand

deaths at your command, but this

adversary is not of this world. Our

sons, our brothers, our fathers

will all perish at the hand of this

beast!

A bit irritated at the general, Giavani walks to the window

to look out over the city. He opens the window and light

shines in and fills the room. Just then we are taken on a

360 degree trip around the city, moving at the speed of

thought.



FAST MOVE TO: a playground where we see children playing.

Chasing each other in a game of tag.



FAST MOVE TO: A woman dressed in common clothes hanging

laundry on a clothing line stopping only to tend to a crying

baby.



FAST MOVE TO: Townsmen working together to rebuild a home

that had been damaged by a fallen tree.



FAST MOVE TO: An elderly woman sitting outside of her home

rocking in a rocking chair reading a book.



FAST MOVE: Back to Giavani’s window where we see him looking

out at the city. Giavani walks a way from his window and we

follow him through the window back over to his desk. He

slams his fist down hard, sending books that were sitting on

the edge of desk tumbling to the ground.



GIAVANI

I have put the innocent at risk! I

know what they are after. We shall

meet them and give them what they

want! Gather your men!

(CONTINUED)



CONTINUED: 3.



NAMELESS

But sir...



GIAVANI

General! Choose your next words

wisely, for I will not be

questioned by you again!



NAMELESS

Yes, my lord.



GIAVANI

Gather all you can find! We will

march tomorrow night.

General Nameless bows slightly with Giavani’s orders and

exits the den.



FLASH FOWARD TO:

EXT. - NIGHT - IL CAMPO DI DOLORI



Lord Giavani finally snaps out of his trance-like state and

rides off rally the troops. He passes men of every age and

creed along the ride all with an evident sense of concern on

their faces. When he reaches the bulk of the soldiers, he

addresses them as their leader.



GIAVANI

Men!... Brothers! I have fought

many battles with a good number

of you who stand in front of me

today. I have killed for you and

you have for me. We have not only

stood against the test of time, but

also against the test of man and we

prevailed!

The army of men cheer.



GIAVANI

(cont’d)

I know what you’ve heard. I know

the stories that have been told

about the beast that lies

ahead. And I know the fear that is

creeping into your hearts this very

second for I have known that fear

myself. I want you to know that the

rumors you’ve heard are all true!

Murmurs of concern swell through the crowd of warriors.

(CONTINUED)



CONTINUED: 4.



GIAVANI

(cont’d)

It is true!! The beast that lies

ahead of us has come from the

darkest depths of Hell to devour

all that stand in their way. And

the fear that lives in your hearts,

you must now use to prevent them

from devouring you! For if you do

not use your fear as a weapon of

survival, not only will we all

perish in Il Campo di Dolori, but

all your families will surely

perish by nightfall. So you are no

longer fighting for your country or

for me! You are fighting to make

sure your sons and daughters have

breath coming morning! You are

fighting so that your wives and

mothers do not spend tonight raped

and beaten. We are fighting today,

because we have no other choice but

to fight and to win. Victory is

our only option!!

The army of men cheer as Lord Giavani finishes his speech.



EXT. - NIGHT - IL CAMPO DI DOLORI



Lord Giavani rides past his men and rejoins General Nameless

and the Scout.



NAMELESS

Nice speech.



Giavani shoots General Nameless a look.



NAMELESS

(cont’d)

You think it worked?



Giavani shoots General Nameless another look and rides off

to lead the men to battle.



SCOUT

Wait, was that a "yes"?



General Nameless laughs and rides to join



Giavani. Scout

follows.

5.



EXT. - DAWN - IL CAMPO DI DOLORI



Lord Giavani, General Nameless and Scout sit upon their

horses at the lead of the line of soldiers staring out over

the battle field. A cold brisk wind kicks up and dark

billowy clouds roll in and overcast the lands from the

sky. Shadows of the the massive army begin to appear across

the battlefield directly opposite of Giavani and his

men. When the shadows transform to more distinctive shapes,

a massive army of catastrophic proportions rears its

head. It looks like an ocean of soldiers marching toward

them.



SCOUT

May God have mercy upon our souls.

The eyes of both Giavani and Nameless stay fixed on the army

in front of them.



NAMELESS

Indeed.


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Thank you

00:04 Dec 22 2007
Times Read: 571


Thank you for answering,, although maybe not really what I wanted to hear, you were honest and very polite and for that I respect you. :)


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Hmmm,,,

20:10 Dec 21 2007
Times Read: 577


You can't find a good reason can you? Im waiting for that answer.... You know who you are... lol .


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A Clue !!

16:02 Dec 20 2007
Times Read: 581


Ok woman this one is for you ..... I have read a lot of journals that say something in the form of,, "I don't know why he won't let me say his name in my journal, why do I have to be a secret, I want to tell everyone that we are together and yet he won't let me"""

I've been there and done that and let me tell you,, the reason he don't want other people to know that your together isn't because its going to effect his status, or reputation or any other stupid thing he telling you,, its simply because he is a player.. He flirts around with other people and don't want anyone else to know he is taken so he don't get sold out.. Wake up here,, If I were you I would post his name all over your journals and profile,, see what happens.. See if I'm right and any other woman come forward to say hey, thats my boyfriend. Love shouldn't be hidden...


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Why are we here?

15:54 Dec 18 2007
Times Read: 593


That is the question..... I believe it is because we all have one thing in common,, we are some how different from the so called "normal" people of the world. We are the "paranormal".. Some of us have "gifts" that we don't understand and and most of us are looking for answers. Most of us are on this site because we have found a place that we fit in. We can't be ourselves in public,, people would think that we are freaks,, so this is our secret life. Holding onto our own beliefs our hopes and dreams that the world is somehow a lot more then what the naked eye can see. We know the truth, we are open to it and even if we can't understand it, we know that another realm is out there, another force of good and evil walks this earth along with us,, we know that we live each day with our fate already outlined and marked for the direction that it is meant to be. But we also know that it is up to us to decide which direction on that path we should go.

So why are we here? Because we all have a purpose in life, and even though you may not realize what the purpose is,, you still have one. Take for instance, the journal post that you write each day may effect someone elses life, the conversation you had with someone earlier may have changed their mind about ending their existence.. Will you ever know that you made a difference,, probably not,, but the fact is in knowing that you do.. Wether it be good or bad is up to you.


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Thought

03:46 Dec 18 2007
Times Read: 599


I just want you to know,,, I am watching you as well...


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Sad

00:02 Dec 14 2007
Times Read: 631


As I sit here and read VR journals,, I come across one that is totally heart breaking.. Not naming names,, but he knows who he is, cause he knows I've been there (to his journal).... Maybe people don't like him much because they don't understand the pain that he is going through... Maybe ppl should take some time to try to understand someone before they are judged..

I know what it is like to have love and to have lost it,,, I understand what it is like to be utterly alone and dead inside... For that person who is suffering,, I tell you this,, I am sorry for your pain but believe me when I say, everything happens for a reason,,, the task is finding the reason and excepting the fate..


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