A Big Thank You to Darkwolf, Billythejust and Artemka for getting my book into the database.. Thank you so much.. :)
I've tried a dozen times to get my book into the database and yet it still won't work.. I don't know why because it is a vampire book,, I'm just so not liked....... O well,, I give up!
I am very excited,, I got the first few chapters back from the screenplay writer on my book Vengeance Comes,, it looks awesome. He is doing a kick ass job and I really believe that it will be a big hit on the big screen.. I am going to post just a lil of it so you can have a taste.. Keep in mine that this material is copy written, if you try to steal it there will be legal action taken not just from me but from the production company as well,, and although I am not allowed to say which production company that is at this time,, I will warn you it is a well known one.... Enjoy the material and comment on it if you wish..
Vengeance Comes
By
Screenplay
by
Eric Feliciano
Story
by
Victoria Rose,
Eric Feliciano
Based on the novel:
Vengeance Comes
by
Victoria Rose
Copyright 2007-2008 iZwe Eric Feliciano
Entertainment (614) 832-6206
ericfeliciano@hotmail.com
EXT. - NIGHT - IL CAMPO DI DOLORI
A large army led by a fierce leader marches onward during
the foggy early morning hours. The sun has yet to rise so
only the moonlight lights their path. Many men on horses
followed by thousands more on foot make their way to the the
battlefield known only as Il Campo di Dolori, "The Field of
Sorrows". We see the sub-title of time and place: "Italy
1492". Lord Marco Giavani, the ageless leader of this army
with long dark hair and piercing eyes, sits upon his horse
along side General Nameless, a young, well-groomed man in
his late thirties. Both sit in silence staring out at the
now empty battlefield. Their silence is broken by a young
Scout riding up to them on horseback.
SCOUT
Sir! The men are in place! We
await your orders, my lord.
Lord Giavani remains staring silently at the battlefield.
FLASH BACK TO:
INT. - DAY - GIAVANI ESTATE
Lord Marco Giavani is sitting in a large thrown-like chair
in front of an over sized fireplace deep in thought. The
room is dark, except from the lighting that the fire burning
within the fireplace provides. General Nameless pushes open
the giant heavy doors to Giavani’s office.
NAMELESS
They are here, sir.
Giavani remains motionless.
GIAVANI
I know.
NAMELESS
They have leveled towns and wiped
out entire family lineages.
GIAVANI
I know.
NAMELESS
What would you have us do, my lord?
GIAVANI
We must fight.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 2.
NAMELESS
But sir... It is said that this
army comes from the pits of Hell
itself. It is said that they are
the damned. They have erased entire
armies from the face of the earth
in a days time! We will lose
thousands if we fight!
GIAVANI
You dare to question my authority,
old friend? We are like David...
Our Goliath awaits us.
NAMELESS
Sir, I’ve fought countless battles
beside you and would die a thousand
deaths at your command, but this
adversary is not of this world. Our
sons, our brothers, our fathers
will all perish at the hand of this
beast!
A bit irritated at the general, Giavani walks to the window
to look out over the city. He opens the window and light
shines in and fills the room. Just then we are taken on a
360 degree trip around the city, moving at the speed of
thought.
FAST MOVE TO: a playground where we see children playing.
Chasing each other in a game of tag.
FAST MOVE TO: A woman dressed in common clothes hanging
laundry on a clothing line stopping only to tend to a crying
baby.
FAST MOVE TO: Townsmen working together to rebuild a home
that had been damaged by a fallen tree.
FAST MOVE TO: An elderly woman sitting outside of her home
rocking in a rocking chair reading a book.
FAST MOVE: Back to Giavani’s window where we see him looking
out at the city. Giavani walks a way from his window and we
follow him through the window back over to his desk. He
slams his fist down hard, sending books that were sitting on
the edge of desk tumbling to the ground.
GIAVANI
I have put the innocent at risk! I
know what they are after. We shall
meet them and give them what they
want! Gather your men!
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 3.
NAMELESS
But sir...
GIAVANI
General! Choose your next words
wisely, for I will not be
questioned by you again!
NAMELESS
Yes, my lord.
GIAVANI
Gather all you can find! We will
march tomorrow night.
General Nameless bows slightly with Giavani’s orders and
exits the den.
FLASH FOWARD TO:
EXT. - NIGHT - IL CAMPO DI DOLORI
Lord Giavani finally snaps out of his trance-like state and
rides off rally the troops. He passes men of every age and
creed along the ride all with an evident sense of concern on
their faces. When he reaches the bulk of the soldiers, he
addresses them as their leader.
GIAVANI
Men!... Brothers! I have fought
many battles with a good number
of you who stand in front of me
today. I have killed for you and
you have for me. We have not only
stood against the test of time, but
also against the test of man and we
prevailed!
The army of men cheer.
GIAVANI
(cont’d)
I know what you’ve heard. I know
the stories that have been told
about the beast that lies
ahead. And I know the fear that is
creeping into your hearts this very
second for I have known that fear
myself. I want you to know that the
rumors you’ve heard are all true!
Murmurs of concern swell through the crowd of warriors.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
GIAVANI
(cont’d)
It is true!! The beast that lies
ahead of us has come from the
darkest depths of Hell to devour
all that stand in their way. And
the fear that lives in your hearts,
you must now use to prevent them
from devouring you! For if you do
not use your fear as a weapon of
survival, not only will we all
perish in Il Campo di Dolori, but
all your families will surely
perish by nightfall. So you are no
longer fighting for your country or
for me! You are fighting to make
sure your sons and daughters have
breath coming morning! You are
fighting so that your wives and
mothers do not spend tonight raped
and beaten. We are fighting today,
because we have no other choice but
to fight and to win. Victory is
our only option!!
The army of men cheer as Lord Giavani finishes his speech.
EXT. - NIGHT - IL CAMPO DI DOLORI
Lord Giavani rides past his men and rejoins General Nameless
and the Scout.
NAMELESS
Nice speech.
Giavani shoots General Nameless a look.
NAMELESS
(cont’d)
You think it worked?
Giavani shoots General Nameless another look and rides off
to lead the men to battle.
SCOUT
Wait, was that a "yes"?
General Nameless laughs and rides to join
Giavani. Scout
follows.
5.
EXT. - DAWN - IL CAMPO DI DOLORI
Lord Giavani, General Nameless and Scout sit upon their
horses at the lead of the line of soldiers staring out over
the battle field. A cold brisk wind kicks up and dark
billowy clouds roll in and overcast the lands from the
sky. Shadows of the the massive army begin to appear across
the battlefield directly opposite of Giavani and his
men. When the shadows transform to more distinctive shapes,
a massive army of catastrophic proportions rears its
head. It looks like an ocean of soldiers marching toward
them.
SCOUT
May God have mercy upon our souls.
The eyes of both Giavani and Nameless stay fixed on the army
in front of them.
NAMELESS
Indeed.
Thank you for answering,, although maybe not really what I wanted to hear, you were honest and very polite and for that I respect you. :)
You can't find a good reason can you? Im waiting for that answer.... You know who you are... lol .
Ok woman this one is for you ..... I have read a lot of journals that say something in the form of,, "I don't know why he won't let me say his name in my journal, why do I have to be a secret, I want to tell everyone that we are together and yet he won't let me"""
I've been there and done that and let me tell you,, the reason he don't want other people to know that your together isn't because its going to effect his status, or reputation or any other stupid thing he telling you,, its simply because he is a player.. He flirts around with other people and don't want anyone else to know he is taken so he don't get sold out.. Wake up here,, If I were you I would post his name all over your journals and profile,, see what happens.. See if I'm right and any other woman come forward to say hey, thats my boyfriend. Love shouldn't be hidden...
That is the question..... I believe it is because we all have one thing in common,, we are some how different from the so called "normal" people of the world. We are the "paranormal".. Some of us have "gifts" that we don't understand and and most of us are looking for answers. Most of us are on this site because we have found a place that we fit in. We can't be ourselves in public,, people would think that we are freaks,, so this is our secret life. Holding onto our own beliefs our hopes and dreams that the world is somehow a lot more then what the naked eye can see. We know the truth, we are open to it and even if we can't understand it, we know that another realm is out there, another force of good and evil walks this earth along with us,, we know that we live each day with our fate already outlined and marked for the direction that it is meant to be. But we also know that it is up to us to decide which direction on that path we should go.
So why are we here? Because we all have a purpose in life, and even though you may not realize what the purpose is,, you still have one. Take for instance, the journal post that you write each day may effect someone elses life, the conversation you had with someone earlier may have changed their mind about ending their existence.. Will you ever know that you made a difference,, probably not,, but the fact is in knowing that you do.. Wether it be good or bad is up to you.
I just want you to know,,, I am watching you as well...
As I sit here and read VR journals,, I come across one that is totally heart breaking.. Not naming names,, but he knows who he is, cause he knows I've been there (to his journal).... Maybe people don't like him much because they don't understand the pain that he is going through... Maybe ppl should take some time to try to understand someone before they are judged..
I know what it is like to have love and to have lost it,,, I understand what it is like to be utterly alone and dead inside... For that person who is suffering,, I tell you this,, I am sorry for your pain but believe me when I say, everything happens for a reason,,, the task is finding the reason and excepting the fate..
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