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chains

07:45 Dec 07 2007
Times Read: 588


you gasp for air

cold

alone

dead

moonlight binds you to the ground

gazing into the dark

the sun starts to rize

your soul disappears

the heart that beat

now burns in your chest





the night comes dark

your body trembles and shivers

your bound again

unable to move

you cry for love

and love cries back





breaking the chains

your lifted up

his gentle pale skin

wraps around your dead soul

no more chains to bind

no more cold to freeze

your soul is free

free to be dead


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Keira
Keira
07:37 Apr 21 2008

This shows the talent, the emotion. I understand this poem like I was that person, always alone and afraid. If I could rate this poem, with creativity and emotion dserves itself a 10.



Keira^_^





 

The dead happiness

07:39 Dec 07 2007
Times Read: 589


shallow life

drowning alone

a gasp for air

cold creeps over pale skin

there is sadness so deep it pulls me down

happiness dies in the deep dark sea


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