as i walk over the green grass below my feet and let my eyes wander along the landscape i suddenly feel the wind caressing my skin. hear it whisper in my ear. open your arms and she will come. open your arms and she will come. but as i open my arms no one comes i stay there alone in the middle of nowhere with my arms wide open feeling the wind on my skin and hearing it whipser. missing the love that i need to live. missing the touch that i need to feel. missing the kiss that i need to breath.
then the night comes and i see the stars. i look at them not turning my eyes away whe i suddenly see a new star. i start to run. running towards it, but it is so far away. i run and run, but i can never reach it. i can never hold it as the star doesnt belong to me. i fall on my knees and stay there. transforming into a stone shaped like a human as love will never touch me again.
COMMENTS
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crystalrose
02:43 Jun 27 2008
awww...i know how you feel hun...thats deep stuff
Pulchritudinous
03:48 Jul 01 2008
i love you, you write so well.
XbloodxsuckerX
05:08 Apr 28 2009
This is so sad, I'm sorry that it feels as if only the wind is embraceing you. But for this moment, I shall sheild the wind and give you an embrace. ^,...,^
Anna
Desire2bbitten
15:31 May 19 2009
I know what it is like to seek something, to finally find it, and then discover it is not there...
Maybe we can stand together and embrace the wind and all it offers
afterall, is it so bad to feel?
as long as we can still feel the wind...as long as we can still hear it whisper...it means we aren't stone
we are still....
here
snakecarmer
15:59 Aug 14 2009
i love you and your poems
lestatslovesoul
13:28 Oct 28 2009
aww!!!...*hugs hugs*....can feel it:(
Desire
11:00 Nov 16 2009
wow! i like it hun. you're a nice writer xxx
Venus9
00:01 Dec 29 2009
this is like .... WOW ! :O
x
AzriellaRipley
09:25 Feb 23 2010
Reading and feeling it.....you just touched my soul
SkittlePop
23:12 Jun 25 2010
I find it very nice. It is touching
DeepestKiss69
11:39 Feb 10 2011
beautiful - that is so touching *holds hand out* Come with my I'll keep you from the wind xx
skyrah
09:00 Aug 28 2011
its really gr8 that somebody can love somebody so much.
VampirateRaven
09:22 Dec 12 2011
Wow, one simple word. Beautiful :)
Elise666
09:26 Mar 05 2014
Wow, very nice!!!!
ladyfae
17:05 Sep 24 2015
Stars blossom as trees,
Crowding the forest of the heavens.
There I fly from light to light
And, as within shadows, go unseen
To creatures that hunt by dark of night.
Though, beyond fiery shield
On occasion I stray,
Just to glimpse what lies beyond
The farthest reaches, free of day,
Which those fearsome creatures call 'home.'