She reaches for something…in the darkness
Is it her soul, her heart?
Is it her wounded pride or is it the cold body of her lover?
She slithers on the floor like a beaten prostitute
Groping for the object of her search.
It is a rather pathetic sight,
She is such a lovely specimen
Apart from her empty, bitter eyes.
Did she ever love?
Did she even laugh?
Did she ever live?
Or has she always been so desolate
Forever trapped in a darkened vast solitude.
Lost, surrounded in black obscurity
She is absent minded, looking aimlessly
Does she even know what her dainty arms reach for?
Do any of us know?
By Jenny Veal
My best friend wrote this. she doent believe she has talent at writting poems all that much so please comment and let her know how good or bad she is...and please give her hits of what she can aprove. thanks
COMMENTS
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wolfkiller
16:40 Feb 27 2008
Very lovely