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4 entries this month
 

Face Me

04:59 Dec 30 2008
Times Read: 725


I'll lift this veil and speak the truth

Your tales, no longer intrigue

Your eyes, hold me no more

Your complacency has driven a length

I’ll not close again

When next you reach

Air will replace me

As I’ve walked away

But you’re too blind to see

Remove the hands from your eyes

Look at me, as I say goodbye



Fm 12-29-08


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Sun Spots

02:32 Dec 29 2008
Times Read: 738


The haze has been lifted

I see you in truth

My eyes have snapped open

My mind cleared of filth



You are not your sweet words

And dear I can't stay

I pulled all this time

You just pushed me away



The carriage ride's over

Your horse and master are gone

Yelling won't make it better

Only move me further along



It's my path ahead

No longer yours to share

I was solitary before

I don't need your shadows here



Step out of my sun

You've blocked it too long

Let go of my compass

And find your own way home



Fm 12-28-08


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Joli
Joli
03:55 Dec 29 2008

Title and verse are perfect in tone. Chilling and well-written.





StoneCrow
StoneCrow
13:04 Dec 30 2008

I have to agree with Jo on this one. It is very well written. A love saga could be written around this easily.





 

Won and Lost

02:06 Dec 29 2008
Times Read: 741


A smile flashes her lips

Rose petals caress her cheeks

Her eyes do not match

The mood her body seeks

Patience is waning

And she sits upon hands

Inside she is screaming

"Get me out of this sham!"

But she dares not betray

The act she's put on

So she sits and she wonders

"How long 'til I'm gone?"

This scene plays before her

Thousands of times she's seen

How the men will all falter

At the girl being keen

She's the answer they want

Or so the fools think

Her skill is the game

No company, she keeps

Yet again they return

Faithful as foolish sheep

She smiles her candied lips

Laughs with a punished ease

The madness at tongue tip

Joy is lost to the tease

Her will is her way

Never revealing the fears

She will triumph this day

And tonight lose to tears



Fm 12-28-08


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There are no words here...

01:05 Dec 29 2008
Times Read: 742


You are correct

There are no poems here

It's been a busy month

I'll write when I can

I have so much to say

The weeks of finals,

Holidays,

Everything else

My notebook feels neglected

As does my mind

I'll find the spark of inspiration

In the calm of the night

Until then my friends

Enjoy my nonsense words

Just filling up space



I still have 2 days.... :p


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