WHEN WE FIRST MET
There's a cute boy in my class
I dropped by and said hi
He smiled said hi back
The bell rang we said bye
While walking away he pulled me close
His eyes as dark as the night
He kissed me he said i smelled as sweet as a rose
We pulled away he smiled so did I
He grabbed my hand and we walked
Down the path of love
And I will never forget the moment we first met
COMMENTS
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theDarkKing
17:46 Nov 07 2012
I really like this.
develon
15:44 Nov 11 2012
Thank you
valdimier
00:34 Nov 24 2012
That was very good you have a real talent there, i can'nt help feeling whilst i was reading your journal that you may have been hurt i sort of feel your pain its like a empty shallow sort of pain like you got knots in your belly, i think you have been hurt recently ,but it is kind of strange that i have these emotions by reading somones journal, please i hope i have'nt offended you that is not what i want i just exspess the way i honestiy feel somtimes.love is strange because when you search for it you will never find it love finds you,it is like you have a invisible connection with that person like the other senses the others feelings ,but i am going on bit here i am probably sound crazy but i am glad that we can be freinds if you don't mind that is well i would like to chat with you somtime in chat when you want too well i'm looking forward from hearing from you again.
develon
05:34 Nov 24 2012
Aww thank you
Yes we can befriends
UpirLikhyj
17:19 Nov 24 2012
Well written... and revealing.
He sounds like a "player." And if he acted as presented here... you got played.