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3 entries this month

 

The one

00:59 Sep 17 2009
Times Read: 568


The air is cool and crisp, the leaves crush below your feet, The moon shows like guide in the night sky directing you along your way. You shiver as a swift breeze passes, yet you keep walking unsure of what lies ahead. Then a voice so soothing calls to you and its very sound puts a your soul at ease, A voice that beckons you deeper along this dark wooded path and then there she stands a sight so beautiful you can barley believe your eyes, her body's curves flow like that of a beautiful painting, her hair darker than the night sky, yet her eyes draw you close to her, and you feel as though her very soul is pulling at your heart. You go to her and she pulls you into her embrace. Then you feel a pain which turns to pleasure as her fangs sink into you and she begins to drain you, You try to pull away but it is to late, you body weakens as your life is sucked from you, and you fall to the ground. You are filled with terror as you sight fades and all around you grows dark. You awaken unsure if what you felt was only a dream, a hunger calls to you like you have never imagined and all you want is the taste of that sweet red liquid, to feel its warmth run through your body as your victims life fades, and your mind is set at ease. She takes your hand and guides you into the night, You follow nervously unsure of what the future holds


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moonkissed
moonkissed
05:04 Sep 17 2009

Wow, cool.





naturalsaphire
naturalsaphire
04:50 Oct 28 2009

very good and well done. I like it a lot





 

Freedom within

00:16 Sep 17 2009
Times Read: 569


The lightning crashes around me, waves crash on the shore in a sound that is so soothing in its own way, I close my eyes lost in the fury of nature, lost in the energy around me, feeding from it and feeling it course through my viens, and awaken a part of me unlike anything else can. My soul ignites like a uncontrolled flame, the sounds and the energy carry me away. For a moment, Iam free, free from all worries, free from all pain, free from harm, lost in the feeling, the sights the sound, even the sand at my feet has feel like never before, I feel my soul lift wanting to stay there and never leave, but knowing I must, and so I wait, for the next time when my soul can feel free again, hoping that somehow I can taste that energy and feel it take me away yet again , and so I wait hoping to find that feeling, hoping that soon my hunger will be fed by that energy so soothing and calm, that even the most bitter heart is warmed by its refreshing life.


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Coming Home

22:39 Sep 06 2009
Times Read: 589


The wind blows embracing me, like a blanket only nature can provide. The earth beckons to me, like a mother to her child. I close my eyes and drift away to a different world, where there is no pain or suffering and the sights of the cities are replaced by the sites of nature. A place where the moon glistens off the river and the stars look like hidden gems waiting to be found, a place which eases the mind and relaxes the soul in a way nothing else can a place of warmth, and happiness, joy, peace and tranquility. A place where no evil can reach and where nature shows its true beauty.



This is a place few understand, but for those who do it is a place that no matter what brings a smile to your face



Derrick


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moonkissed
moonkissed
21:09 Sep 10 2009

It is lovely derrick. Truly.








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