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Seared Eyes Scorched Minds

23:44 Apr 23 2009
Times Read: 719


Those who Stare into intense glares

expecting to be blessed with enlightenment

how they find the often dimmer reality Dull

missing brilliant discoveries while

expecting sensational experiences

anything less phenomenal then supernatural

is disregarded as mundane

such are those with seared eyes

and scorched minds


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VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
15:46 Apr 24 2009

Is that sort of like not seeing the forrest for the tees?





dabbler
dabbler
18:26 Apr 24 2009

Yeppers, and disregarding bushes as insignificant compared to tree forest.





WaitsForTheMoon
WaitsForTheMoon
01:48 Jun 18 2010

nice observational Prose





Sanirah
Sanirah
15:23 Mar 03 2014

Ooooh





 

This Splendid Torpor

05:51 Apr 19 2009
Times Read: 741


This splendid torpor

All at once

A Rushing Swoosh!

pushed past

veil thin umbra of

chrackling static fog

clearing away to

ethereal atmosphere

Surreal merging

with memories

To be suspended

in torpor





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VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
06:40 Apr 19 2009

I like it





MirageInAComa
MirageInAComa
22:26 Apr 21 2009

This leaves me feeling sad.



Like something left undone.



Dreams not realized.





dabbler
dabbler
22:33 Apr 21 2009

Life unexplored, weighs upon a person in Torpor.





 

Thurmal

23:47 Apr 08 2009
Times Read: 773


Thurmal

Is a How Yer' Derin'

not Normal nor average

Joe no



He is Thurmal

T-h-u-r-m-a-l



completely content

Hot Soup or coffee

In his Thermus



Thurmal

Knotted shoe strings

and canvas rivited overalls

Not at all like you and usual folk



Thurmal is in no way odd

Just a bit disheveled,

Saying his name

Sounds like yer' a snifflin'



Just when you meet him

Thurmal will know your name

and now he will avow

On seeing your face



I'm Thermal, ..And your Not..

Your name is___ Not Thurman


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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
00:34 Apr 09 2009

Somehow that makes sence to me :)





dabbler
dabbler
01:57 Apr 09 2009

I should add a correction, in the last stanza, it says "I,m Thermal.."

It should read " Erm' Thermal.."



Thermal is my inner childs, imaginary friend..








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