Those who Stare into intense glares
expecting to be blessed with enlightenment
how they find the often dimmer reality Dull
missing brilliant discoveries while
expecting sensational experiences
anything less phenomenal then supernatural
is disregarded as mundane
such are those with seared eyes
and scorched minds
This splendid torpor
All at once
A Rushing Swoosh!
pushed past
veil thin umbra of
chrackling static fog
clearing away to
ethereal atmosphere
Surreal merging
with memories
To be suspended
in torpor
COMMENTS
I like it
This leaves me feeling sad.
Like something left undone.
Dreams not realized.
Life unexplored, weighs upon a person in Torpor.
Thurmal
Is a How Yer' Derin'
not Normal nor average
Joe no
He is Thurmal
T-h-u-r-m-a-l
completely content
Hot Soup or coffee
In his Thermus
Thurmal
Knotted shoe strings
and canvas rivited overalls
Not at all like you and usual folk
Thurmal is in no way odd
Just a bit disheveled,
Saying his name
Sounds like yer' a snifflin'
Just when you meet him
Thurmal will know your name
and now he will avow
On seeing your face
I'm Thermal, ..And your Not..
Your name is___ Not Thurman
COMMENTS
Somehow that makes sence to me :)
I should add a correction, in the last stanza, it says "I,m Thermal.."
It should read " Erm' Thermal.."
Thermal is my inner childs, imaginary friend..
COMMENTS
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VAMPIREBLONDEE
15:46 Apr 24 2009
Is that sort of like not seeing the forrest for the tees?
dabbler
18:26 Apr 24 2009
Yeppers, and disregarding bushes as insignificant compared to tree forest.
WaitsForTheMoon
01:48 Jun 18 2010
nice observational Prose
Sanirah
15:23 Mar 03 2014
Ooooh