how do i know youre the one for me ?
can i trust that you'll be there to catch me when i fall?
or will you only break my heart and just leave me be?
if you could only see, when you look into my eyes .
That how i feel is real and true and should come as no surprise
already the feelings are powerfully strong, so when we get together nothing could go wrong!
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Your poems are charged with your emotions loved them.They make my heart flutter.
i came across your picture, when somethin caught my eye
you sat so straight and confident, and held your head up high.
so i took the time to write a note and sent it straight to you,
to my surprise you wrote me backwhen i was feelin blue.
you asked if you could text me, then you made a call,
i never dreamed it would happen but........
im happy after all!!
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What a great little rhyme.I love the rhythm of it.
Glad your happy too!
sigh if we could only be so lucky
Nice poem,you have a very nice poetic touch.I write too,check out some of my poems In my journal under poetry.
i dont know what to think, im torn apart
sometimes i feel like i have a cold heart.
Do i cry? or not shed a tear,
do i keep it all in and show no fear?
I never know how, or what to feel
always told i dont care and what i show is not real!
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Very nice poem.How long have you been writing?
since i was 19 or 20
!6 here most of my stuff got lost when angelfire crashed I was so mad.A life work down the drained when that happened.
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xXTroublexX
06:16 Jan 29 2011
It is a leap of faith to love.
darksurfer1969
03:42 Mar 06 2011
Very nice poem.Sometimes you have to just fall,and If you are caught then you know that It's right.
shiyangel
06:30 Mar 17 2011
coming from someone who as just had their heart riped out and one of ur besties go slow and see where it leads u baby
darksurfer1969
08:31 Mar 22 2011
I'll proved myself to her,just have to get back on my feet.eg