i always believed you could
take the kid outta the fight
but never the fight outta the kid
But today i was corrected
you won
im gone,this kid has lost
this kid has been tortured
to the extent where she drowned
drowned in her own blood
Quoting lines from shakespear
"oh happy dagger"except it wasnt a dagger
she used it was a wilknson blade
for you see
its terrible for you to be
but to her it was nothing
new to see, just this time
that hand had more fear and less fight
less fight to live
for she went to deep
just a little but thats all it takes
such a small girl couldnt have caused such a mess
so much blood on those white tiles
and in her hand,her now so lifeless hand
lay her 'happy blade'
i hear you ask why i mention such things
because if i let you take the fight outta me
there would be no white tiles in my bathroom tomorrow
but would it cause you any sorrow?
COMMENTS
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ReverantSpark
02:43 Oct 25 2010
The imagery is so vivid... I can feel my heart twinge as I imagine that once confident hand holding a blade to her wrist scared and unsure...
Makes my heart grow heavy reading it.
NOKTURNL
10:46 Dec 23 2019
nice