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i am the old graveyard

23:57 Apr 07 2005
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I am the oldgraveyard

dark and mysterious

silent and hallow

cold and bitter

walk through me

and

see the moon shine down and

kiss your cheeks

feel the wind wisp through your hair

hear the rustling of lost souls

smell the decaying leaves

touch the damp qravestones beneth your fingertips

a layer of thin fog

swirls around your ankles

this is my veil

but i cant quite seem to disappear



this is my fisrt real poem i just put it up here to ask if anyone thinks it is good i dont know i think

it is bad but i cant tell so please someone tell me thanks *kisses*


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