Victoria777's Vampire Journal

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Eternity
05:28 Mar 16 2007
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I was searching for a happiness The kind to set me free, You came along and lifted me up You showed me how gentle love could be. I am grateful for the love you show The way you make me feel, I used to see you in my dreams But I know now you are real. When our lips meet in a kiss It's a moment lost in time, A complete and wholesome feeling, That completely blows my mind. I believe I have found my happiness Having you here with me, As I turn to look into your loving eyes, I can see eternity.

COMMENTS

killersnowman
18:08 Jan 16 2008

hey this is really good I usually write poems but only to girls though

AzriellaRipley
01:46 Apr 06 2010

What an awesome poem...

TheVampyreNico
06:30 Jul 21 2013

Quite beautiful poem indeed it touches ones heart an vary soul indeed.

sippa
12:34 Dec 26 2014

loving words from a loving heart....there's simply nothing more beautiful than that

Purifier
12:46 Jul 21 2016

you have a gift sweet Tori....never let it die

Do not weep
05:26 Mar 16 2007
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Do not stand at my grave and weep.

I am not there, I do not sleep.

I am a thousand winds that blow.

I am the diamond glints on snow.

I am the sunlight on ripened grain.

I am the Gentle autumn rain.

When you awaken in the mornings hush,

I am the swift uplifting rush

of quiet birds in circled flight,

I am the soft stars that shine at night.

Do not stand at my grave and cry,

I am not there, I did not die.

COMMENTS

COMAxBLACK
22:57 Jul 03 2008

this is really good tell me when u write more

DeadHeir
01:19 Oct 26 2008

i know this was posted a ways back, but I read it and had to comment it...

its beautiful, and I really love the imagery

even the scheme is sound, and its written with a feeling of contemplative passion, that could be taken in so many different ways

thank you for sharing it :)