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i sit on the side of the lake

watching the water in silence

then i see a small ripple

and watch how it grows



while im sitting there i think

how thet simple little ripple

reminds me of how such small things

can turn into giant ones



one small thing

like a parents divorce

is so small at the begining

but grows into a big problem



eventurally the ripples of life go away

and life returns to normal

that is how life is like a simple lake

it always returns to normal

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COMAxBLACK
23:11 Jun 20 2008

nice i love it

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ShadowKnight5107
23:32 Jul 12 2008

o my god that is amazing you are so right though some time the ripple changes what normal is

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bloodtaintedstars
17:01 Sep 08 2008

i like that, and, i have alot of idea's of what it means too.

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Stuck in this classroom

all day love

and as the day progresses

my life goes all wrong



my music gets taken away

along with my book

now all thats left for me to do

is out the window to look



i get bored of that quickly

so i sit here and write

put my negative thoughts on paper

then later turn them into a kite



i wil make the kite later

and fly it in the air

and let go

and watch my troubles disapear

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morbidcuriousity
20:48 Jun 17 2008

your writing impresses me

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bloodtaintedstars
17:03 Sep 08 2008

Only if life was that simple huh?

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im sorry that im not perfect

but what is perfect anyway

an hour glass figure

perfect hair and teeth

no glasses and long nails

what about inside huh?

what is classified as "perfect" inside

is it no problems

allways keeping a positive attitude?

im sorry to say but

NO ONE IS LIKE THAT!

no matter what.

they may seem to have a perfect life

but inside they may be miserable

before you judge someone look on the inside

because the person who has everything

may be seriously depressed

and the person who has nothing

may be the happiest anywhere

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DiabolicMessiah
23:34 Jun 15 2008

HOLY FUCKIN' COW !!!

That was BADASS!!!

amen sister!

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DarkWolfman
03:01 Jun 16 2008

Nice words

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morbidcuriousity
20:48 Jun 17 2008

Very well written

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lused
23:42 Jun 22 2008

amens my frend you have pation on what you right witch means you have also been hert.... well done on getting thru what ever it was ok and good luck

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posionfangs
20:21 Jul 31 2008

I love it

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AnimeKikei
03:55 Aug 09 2008

couldn't have said it better myself!!!!

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bloodtaintedstars
17:04 Sep 08 2008

Yes, very true indeed.

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look at the bird

up in the sky

flying so high

and free

having no cares

no worries

no thoughts

jsut flying through the air

a beautiful sight

i close my eyes then and think

wouldnt it be wonderful

to be that bird

to fly away from all thats wrong

never to look back

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Sinora
18:34 Jul 12 2008

One day you will grow your wings and fly away. Life now is hard for you...but look forward to the day it gets better.

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bloodtaintedstars
17:06 Sep 08 2008

one day we can all look back, and sigh in relief.

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With this goblet

Filled with wine

I beseech thee

Arise and be mine



With this candle

Made of wax

I beseech thee

Come as I ask



With this knife

I draw my blood

I beseech thee

Arise from the mud



With these tears

Streaming down my face

I beseech thee

Come out of thy case



With this heart

Broken in my chest

I beseech thee

Come out of thy rest

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DiabolicMessiah
05:49 Jun 12 2008

Ok, I don't know who told you that you couldn't write, but they were fuul of shit. You just got across pure emotion in what you wrote. Desire. Lonliness. Calling out for this mysterious being to come and fill some emptiness that is within you.

At least that's the feeling it gives me. EXCELLENT WORK!!! Don't stop!

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DiabolicMessiah
05:52 Jun 12 2008

wow... now nowing this is for your brother, it really tears at my gut. He'd be proud of you.

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darkchyld
23:37 Jun 13 2008

Very awesome job... You are talented... Your writing is with so much depth and intensity.

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Joannachronism
00:02 Aug 29 2008

Your writing is excellent.

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bloodtaintedstars
17:08 Sep 08 2008

Very nice poem.

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i always look for him

where ever i go

and then i see him

my face falls oh no



you have your arms around her

making out right in the hall

she is the biggest slut ever

and we are friends thats all



i run to the bathroom

go in the stall and cry

what the hell is wrong with me

why did i ever try



ever time i see him now

i wonder why

all i did was love him

and he jsut made me cry

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DarkWolfman
03:00 Jun 12 2008

Interesting indeed

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DiabolicMessiah
05:56 Jun 12 2008

It seems to me that you have no trouble writing what's in your heart. Which has obviously been broken at least once. I really look forward to reading more.....there WILL be more, right?

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darkchyld
23:37 Jun 13 2008

Your writing is so heartfelt.

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posionfangs
23:46 Jun 15 2008

All of your poetry is lovley dear.... but i love this one. Keep it up ur doing a great job.

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scarymee
21:32 Jun 22 2008

this is awesome and one of the best i have read .

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rockerchickamc
23:20 Sep 02 2008

that's really good



well, most guys like sluts cuz most guys like sex so self-explainatory lol

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bloodtaintedstars
23:44 Sep 08 2008

AWWWW.

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LaathSweiReborn
18:39 Oct 25 2008

Sadly a good portion of men are like that, I do not agree with such things, one must look past him, he was not meant for you, and clearly you deserve something much more, someone far more rare. great poem.

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