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I wrote this back in May 2007 in my creative writing class for a project we had to do dealing with flash fiction, or short stories. Only had to be about 300 words. It's a short and quick summary sort of of a longer story I'm working on that I hope to maybe one day publish.

(Oh and any comments on my work is fine with me. I love getting feedback on my work.)





~Tiger Dream~



Silently slipping from each person's subconscious and through their dreams, he walks. Bright sapphire eyes set into white fur glistening as snow and black stripes as dark as black onyx adorning and glistening as well. Four large paws support his large body and long tail swaying back and forth behind. He's larger than the average white tiger, and he looks at first glance, almost twice its size. Strong and fierce looking yet gentle too. His name is Tsuki, or moon, in Japanese and he comes to those calling out to him.

He is in constant battle with his two older brothers though. Mako, the oldest, is a bright orange-red tiger with dark stripes and bright yellow eyes that gleam as if they're on fire. He prowls on the hated feelings a person has and strengthens those feelings until they go mad. He brings chaos and destruction everywhere he goes, burning the person's emotions and feelings like a raging wildfire. He is hate and destruction.

Shin, the second oldest, is a large black tiger with white stripes and deep crimson red eyes. He is the opposite of Mako but brings his own destruction to the person he stalks. He brings the rain and snow, in the sense, of grief and sadness and eternal sleep. He puts despair into hearts of many and tries to swallow and bury them in the snow. He is suffering, sorrow, and death.

Tsuki battles them in a never ending war with his younger sister, Ai, sometimes. She is a white tiger like him but with a soft yellow tint and bright green eyes. She brings comfort and happiness to those calling to her. She is love and compassion.

And Tsuki, he is hope.

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LivNdedGirl
04:31 Dec 10 2009

i loved your story ...it is fresh :)

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Become
03:06 Dec 13 2009

Really good writing here. Very visual, with a lot said in so few words. You're good, keep it up.

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SheWolf85
07:30 Dec 23 2009

The characters represent a part of a person, don't they? Awesome.. Sometimes, I feel like Tsuki too.. Thank you for this.. :)

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Angelus
00:35 Jan 31 2010

you have a good writing style.

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TwilightRayvn
04:31 Jan 31 2010

Thank you very much. ^_^

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darksurfer1969
23:18 Feb 14 2011

Loved the story,It's very neat.I think you could really do something with It too once you ad more to It.I write stories too sometimes,but they can be fill with erotic content.I tend to get a lot of comments on my stuff,I'll have to post something here once I find out what the guide lines are for posting more adult like stuff on here.They not really dirty,they just tend to make your mind go there If you know what I mean.eg

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