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I have befriended you (part 1)

03:52 Dec 27 2007
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Once upon a time there was a young boy named, Nick he was at the age of change. He is 15 and tired of school, and is way to busy to have a girlfriend to be close with. He is in an alternative rock band called, "The Dwellers". He lives his life like a gothic boy lost and confused. He plays the guitar, and sings, and writes his own lyrics. One day after they had finished playing in the underground basement. They all departed their own ways and he was alone and he felt like going outside for some fresh air, and smoke a cigarette. It`s calm, and the wind blows a bit and then, he hears something like a voice but, he can`t make it out. He says, "Who`s out there?" And then the voice got closer to him to make it out and the voice replied back, :Hey, there matie how are you on this fine night." Nick sees this huge figure that stepped out from the darkness like there was nothing there before. "I`m doing okay I could be better." said, Nick. He had no idea who this strange guy was or if he was a cool person. The huge stranger said, "I`m Kole it`s a pleasure to meet you..." as he holds out his hand to shake. "I`m Nick nice to meet you Kole." as he pulls his hand out of his coat pocket an grabs Kole`s hand. He feels that its icy cold like that of a dead corpse. He doesn`t mean to be rude but, Nick just comes right out and says, "Do you work in the ice cream business?" Kole laughs out loud to himself and says, "Well nobut I like that curious thought. Let me ask you this Nick, Do you believe in vampyres?" Nick`s like say what did you say. "Do I believe in vampires. I guess I do why you ask." I just wanted to know your thoughts on them. But, Kole never tells Nick that he is in fact one and lets him try to figure it out on his own. And then Nick slowly starts too realize that Kole is a vampyre. He finds it rather cool too have met him on that night. "I have to take my leave of you now Nick but, I shall come back to visit more with you next time" said, Kole. He then bows and turns and walks away back into the darkness from whence he came. And Nick feels that he has made a new found friend fo life. An he felt good on the inside.



What more will there be in store tune in and find out.



The End For Now!


COMMENTS

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MizzVampiria
MizzVampiria
05:42 Apr 24 2008

Very interesting,gives me thoughts on what is to happen on the next encounter. Nice.





YourBratPrince
YourBratPrince
20:09 May 04 2008

Nick seems like a very interesting character!



But i must ask, am i the one you used for inspiration for Kole?



He seems much like me.



Very interesting idea, Nico.



A goth boy meeting a real immortal.



Who knew?



I love it!



-+-Lestat-+-





vampirelisa
vampirelisa
03:20 Jun 22 2008

love it.





TheShadowChaos
TheShadowChaos
21:51 Nov 05 2008

A great beginning to what's sure to be an awesome story. :)





TemptingDeath
TemptingDeath
06:58 Nov 07 2008

Oooh! I am interested darling!!





LittleFox
LittleFox
08:02 Dec 15 2008

interesting





newlyawaken
newlyawaken
13:14 Feb 03 2009

I like it





vampchica4
vampchica4
22:07 Feb 14 2009

Wow. How much a longing can pull, that makes a perso want to be able to relate.





VampyreGurl22
VampyreGurl22
07:21 Aug 04 2009

Good start leaves you hanging





sweetstrwbrry
sweetstrwbrry
04:50 Aug 16 2009

I always ended up friends with the anti social band guy, so I see his point of view.





EternallyYours
EternallyYours
07:22 Dec 30 2009

Can not wait to read more so far so good.....*smiles*





NightRaven
NightRaven
06:08 Feb 19 2010

is good makes u want more





MIRCALLA
MIRCALLA
07:13 Jun 04 2011

Becareful Nick, what seems to be the friend might turn out to be the enemy...



Yes, Vampyres are described as mysterious creatures who present theirselves with elegance and grace, they have the gift of manipulating you under a web of dark enchanting sensuality.



If Kole introduced himself only, I would say he wants to mentor Nick into becoming one of his kind.

Very good read my dear.





Bloodrose1970
Bloodrose1970
05:00 Jul 06 2011

wow very nice begining





JazmynKnight
JazmynKnight
01:42 Sep 17 2011

fantastic. I love the way you write





TheVampyreNico
TheVampyreNico
01:51 Sep 17 2011

Thank you





melanthe
melanthe
06:35 Sep 08 2012

It is interesting. It has that Anne Rice vampire feeling going on like in Interview with a Vampire, but more modern.





LilithAsphodel
LilithAsphodel
06:53 Jul 19 2014

Loved it can't wait to read more.





TheFangtasticOne
TheFangtasticOne
03:20 May 16 2018

I have a feeling this story is more than meets the eye








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