Nick has the greatest task laid before him to accept the dark gift from his vampyre friend Kole. He walks around back an forth in his room and lays down in his bed and thinks of this offer. He falls to sleep as his brain ponders the idea of eternal life. I will have a new look about me and my lifestyle will change for the better. Several hours have past an its morning all ready. He tells all his friends goodbye and he is planning on a big trip too the many country`s and over seas. He leaves all his belongings behide him as he waits for Kole at the same place as the first place they had met before. He is ready for what ever will come next. As he sits and waits for Kole he smokes his Kools cigarette and watches other people walk on by doing there own thing. Then night falls and Kole walks up to Nick and says,"Have you made up you mind yet too what I have asked you before." 'yes, I have an my answer is yes I will accept your offer." replied Nick. " Come an walk with me Nick I have some one you need too meet that you will like very much so." said, Kole to Nick. They walk and reach the local graveyard and walk too the center of it. where two vampyres are awaiting for Kole and his new fledging Nick. One of the vampyres is there to witness this ritual take place and the other is a lovely female vampyre that will be Nick`s mate an companion in this new lifestyle. They reach it and Kole nods towards the other two. Kole says to Nick, "This is my old friend Marcus and the lovely lady`s name is Necudra" She nods to him with a smile on her face. "Its now time to begin the ritual " as Kole turns, and looks too Nick. Kole tells Nick, "to shut his eyes an to relax, an breath easy. "Kole says, "You will feel a slight pain for a bit but it will not last too long I promise." Kole bites down hard on Nick`s neck and draws blood and feeds on him for a 7 minutes and stops and tell him that he had drained him to the point of near death. An he bites his wrist an places it to Nick`s mouth an tells him to drink. This last`s about 4 minutes and he stops feeding from Kole`s arm and gets up an walks around and the pain hits him hard and he falls down near a grave site and rolls around and then lays flat and the change starts to take form and he stops breathing for a minute and then breaths air and he rises up from the grassy grave, and tells Kole that he wants more. Of course you do my young friend pulls him up from the grassy graveyard and tells him to walk with Necudra she will feed with you. An help you out and I will see you later on okay enjoy your beautiful gift Nick. You will have alot of things to learn now that you are one of us now. Kole tells Necudra to keep an eye on him for him until he returns back to meet up with them later on that night. And Kole and Marcus goes and talks of plans for Nick and why they need him for?
Tune in next time too see what plans are in store for Nick.
COMMENTS
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MizzVampiria
21:21 Apr 29 2008
Wonderful! Now I await part 5..... ;-)
YourBratPrince
20:32 May 04 2008
Well well... Necudra sounds like quite the women...
LOL
Well, i love it.
I cant wait to hear part 5.
Sounds like they are planning Nicks second death right after his first!
LOL
I love it
vampirelisa
03:19 Jun 22 2008
i like this
SEXYbloodSUCKER
00:45 Jul 30 2008
loved it from beingin to end hun :) very well done
TheShadowChaos
22:25 Nov 05 2008
And the plot thickens! I love it. :)
LittleFox
07:49 Dec 15 2008
your stories thrill me and give me a rush.
VampyreGurl22
07:29 Aug 04 2009
it goes part 2 to 4
VampyreGurl22
07:38 Aug 04 2009
good but its anticapating while you are changing stories
LadyBloodMoon
01:51 Mar 25 2010
This reminds me of a question I asked. A entry titled Disapear
MIRCALLA
05:57 Jun 12 2011
Magnificant story, if it truly is... A story.
Bloodrose1970
05:04 Jul 06 2011
I did read this story and I really liked it hun. I just did not rate it.
JazmynKnight
02:00 Sep 17 2011
I love this story
TheFangtasticOne
18:43 May 16 2018
Nico simply amazing picturing the ritual in my head going on thats how good you wrote it and not a lot of people can do that to me so im impressed