Sanctuary12:15 Jul 14 2009
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The women stares out the window into the unknown. She feels lost trying to find why and when she began to feel this way. She's blessed and cursed, Lost but found, The ultimate paradox of the human being. She's enchanting and many man would kill to be by her side and she would kill to find peace. She doesnt realize that peace is inside her, for every time she looks she feels that inside is her ultimate enemy. '' Where is my peace?'' She wispers aloud to herself, feeling that all is hopeless. She's a beautiful being and their is a man that waits for her.
He can promise no comitment although he can ease the pain. He can not promise forever but he can destroy her worst enemy until the end of time. Is he an angel? No, I tell you this he is far from. The only thing he can do is build one place and one place only. A place where she can rest forever, A place where she can dwell without worries. The place she longs for every second of everyday. The path they both walked is cold, long, and confusing.
The man has learned to endure, the women has learned to forget. Together they have learned the love of pain . The need to escape has been forgotten, In his arms her problems seem so distant. This is no love story, For love is non existent in the shadow's of men's hearts, And this man's heart has been threw age's of turmoil. It's been scarred, torn, and broken, but beats fiercer than ever. This is enduring.. This is excepting the pain, because he know's its the realist thing he can experience.
She's acting timid as if its her first time interacting with a male. His eyes are oceans filled with different lives of age's past. Her eye's are like a desert waiting to envelope and comfort to where he can sleep forever, but this is not the time. Theirs only time for one thing to tell her her purpose, and his cause for being in her presence. She's not ready to listen but still he speaks.. He tells her he's a man that's similar to a labrinth and the end is no where in sight so dont try to understand the reason's to my words for my perception is beyond the human mind. In you I see an understanding that stirs my soul and contains my words until manufactured into perfection... So now I speak...
You are what you speak of at times whether you like to hear this or not.. You are a lost soul, but fear not for I have found you. I wonder at times why I've been created until im greeted with these moment's. These moments of trials and tribulation become me and then I transform until I am no form except feeling.. Your feeling.. I wish you peace but it falls on deaf ears. I'd wish you love but I dare not curse you. I'd pray for you but god already sent me. So I am hear to say You are the best you can be at this point in time but you fear to much and this stop's you from excepting you destiny.
The reason Im hear is you and if you allow me, comfort I shall instill forever, but once again your fear is to great. At times you think one more blow to the heart would destroy you,but Im hear to tell you if its not used or destroyed it doesnt exist anyway. So open your heart as I open my arms for it is the ultimate sanctuary and my mind is at peace.. So join me without thoughts of the future or past because they dont exist NOW...
COMMENTS
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XipeToltec
00:02 Jul 17 2009
That's excellent SI. Keep on writing!
Jypcie
02:50 Jul 17 2009
Wow! That's really quite good. It has a nice flow to it, and easy to read. good job!
RaineyLustfulBites
18:54 Jul 17 2009
Loved this well written and reminds me of spoken words my master tells me...
Bravo keep it up
masterwolf
22:44 Jul 17 2009
very nice
AngelBaby333
01:14 Jul 20 2009
lol you should work on your grammer/spelling some more
RomaMarieNightwing
01:17 Jul 20 2009
Excellent Art works! Very passionate. Tens in my book!
PhantomVampire
01:55 Jul 20 2009
So moving!
Magnifico!
Br0k3nWings
02:03 Jul 20 2009
Oh my god.... I LOVE the way you wrote this out.... there are few people of this time that can write something that gets to me, and it shot me right in the heart....
Very well written
Vampfan1
02:13 Jul 20 2009
so very amazing, i love it.
draculagirl101
02:51 Jul 20 2009
I really like your stuff.
Very nice.
So far of what I have read you are an amazing writer.
ThatOneGirl
03:08 Jul 20 2009
the format is more like a story or than poetry. but I like it very much, you're rather talented.
charskiss
00:48 Jul 21 2009
As I read this it almost warms this old cold dead heart, I feel a tear of release fall from dried up glands and sigh, to know this would be sanctuary to only have the peace that doesn't exist anywhere , sleep , feel comfort and love. No that will never be.
Passionforblood
01:07 Jul 21 2009
you blow me away wow I realy loved it ..(-:
SupremeImmortal
06:12 Nov 14 2015
I must say after reading all of your comments.. Thank you so much, I will work on something tonight and post. All of you have inspired me.