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Just Between Us

09:39 May 13 2007
Times Read: 662


Shadowed in a memory

You seem so familiar to me

Even through the distance

I feel the bound between us

Your words the essence of truths untold

My heart was broken

now is yours to hold

To capture each moment and memory with you

Nothing left forgotten, never being untrue

From the first moment I spoke with you

my breathe was taken away

Who was this enchanting stranger

My heart was yours even then

A great friend you have become

Few ever get the chance to be trusted by me

In only a short time, you proved that you were worthy

My heart, trust, & mind shall be yours

For you are my master

with you is where I shall stay

till the day you send me away.


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Isis101
Isis101
02:12 Oct 20 2008

this is very nice





(I can't write poetry for shit).





 

Embrace

09:37 May 13 2007
Times Read: 663


She said she was broken

she said she was blue

she thought she needed everything

then she found you

Her world has changed forever

this much is so true

all she knows now is

she's falling for you.



Your still a mistery

the hopeless romantic she is

these things matter not

she thought life meant misery.

That was the only defintion ever found

Into her life walks this stranger

this warrior, or hero

he mastered her with simple words

thoughts about his touch

she longs for his embrace

this she wants so much.



While others left her borken & bleeding

he helps her rise again

The love she once knew

this mysterious man

on his journey

protecting the innocent, helping the weak

He seems to understand her pain & sadness

for without him she would surely be driven to madness.



Scared and running helplessly

she stumbled into thee

now the pain & misery

become just fading memories.


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newblood1
newblood1
00:35 Jul 16 2008

Interesting poem, have you ever thought about putting music to it?





SouthernFreak
SouthernFreak
01:51 Jul 16 2008

Well I usually have some sort of beat in my head when I write poetry but I'm no good at creating tunes.





Isis101
Isis101
02:13 Oct 20 2008

Another good one...sigh.








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