With a mighty cry
a warrior falls.
He see's no one
yet he still calls.
He lays in pain
his body battered.
He needs his sword,
but its been shattered.
His enemy near
he tries to stand.
He has to fight
for his land.
Cloaked in black
his enemy stares.
And he's met
with mighty glares.
The warrior dies.
The enemy takes his leave
and soon there'll be no one
left to greive.
Condemed to death
she walks in a daze.
They tie her to the stake
and she silently pray's.
They start the fire
and all she can see
is twisted faces
smiling in glee.
Her skin burns
as the flames grow
she looks to the sky
she see's a crow.
The pains too much
and death is near.
There's nothing she can do
she screams in fear.
She slowly dies.
The crowd cheers.
They leave to celebrate
with friends and beers.
COMMENTS
its dark and so true for to me its how people are today yet not at the stack they are called names and picked on for they are differnt. i love it 5 gold stars
Thanks. I wrote this poem after reading a book on the Salem Witch Trials. the book made me really really mad though and I was happy to find out in real life the main characters mom hadn't really died. the book was based off a true story but they'd twisted the end.
Ya I can see how it can be linked to the now. Some people are judged by others and hurt for no reason.
Into the fields
she tries to escape.
She tries to hide
so she wears a cape.
The sound of howls
and angry shouts.
She's scared to death,
but ignores her doubts.
She trips and falls
and hurts her leg.
The men attack her
and she starts to beg.
There is no hope
the dogs attack.
She cannot fight
she's never coming back.
Golden eyes
that glow in the dark.
They watch you run
and are followed with a bark.
You stop and listen
then turn around.
You see the beast
and scream aloud.
You try to run,
but fall instead.
In your last moments
you think of what he said:
"Come to me
late at night.
Do not worry
I will not bite..."
COMMENTS
This was for a halloween poem I had to do. Pretty much its about a werewolf who told a girl to meet him at night and she does and dies.
sweet reminds me of blood and chocolate :)
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I love you so,
but I'm so shy.
I wish to express my feelings,
but I'd surely die.
My heart breaks,
whenever I see you.
For I know,
that I can never be with you.
She sleeps on her bed,
dreaming of a past forgotten.
She stands in an orchard,
the fruit's all rotten.
She looks around
and see's a prince.
She knows him from her childhood,
but she hasn't seen him since.
He climbs down from his horse
and gives her hand a kiss.
Somethings not right,
she feels no bliss.
The prince backs away
and then dissapears.
Everything goes dark
and she's assualted by her fears.
A demon crawls up from the ground
and in his mouth is a bloody bone.
She screams as she falls to the ground
and wakes up to find that she's not alone...
COMMENTS
This I didn't even think or plan. I just kept writing and this is what turned out. Its about a girl having a good dream then it suddenly all goes bad and she wakes up to find that she's not alone any more in her room.
very good not everything is what it seems to be
very forklore keep it up
Taking the blame,
I hold my head up high.
They yell and scream
and I try not to cry.
When they're angers spent
and they have nothing more to say.
I go to my room
and try to keep the tears at bay.
The pains so intense,
but I don't want her to worry.
So I try to sleep
and the pain I burry.
I am the shield
and the protector.
I have to be,
because I promised to always protect her.
COMMENTS
This poem I actually wrote about my past and still partial present. I lived with my grandma for a while and she'd always get really pissed off at me for my grades. Since its something i felt she had a right to be angry at me for I took it all and when she saw that I wasn't bothered by her yelling at me or anything she'd start freaking out on my sister when she got perfect grades and never did anything wrong. I'd always end up trying to comfort my sis and I'd always promise her it wouldn't happen again and I'd try to protect her.... I'm a crappy protector though and there was nothing I could really do unless I wanted to make things worse....
The rain washes away my tears
And the sorrow in my heart suddenly clears.
The rain stops as suddenly as it had started
And I stare down at my wound that had smarted.
The pain is gone, washed away by the rain.
The beast that had hurt me lays on the ground slain.
My hero turns swiftly to leave
And he has wings which I just can’t believe.
I watch him go and fly away
And I wish I’d known sooner what to say.
COMMENTS
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nativepride
06:54 Dec 31 2008
i love it. its true and yet dark well i see it like that.its calming to hear at the same time.
Sithiliar
07:02 Dec 31 2008
Thanx! I always try my best when writing a poem or a story and i love doing them about the past. Its also cool to hear that its calming. :P
RaineyLustfulBites
20:50 Jun 02 2009
Like it too love the imagery I got