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A warriors fate

03:13 Dec 31 2008
Times Read: 634


With a mighty cry

a warrior falls.

He see's no one

yet he still calls.

He lays in pain

his body battered.

He needs his sword,

but its been shattered.

His enemy near

he tries to stand.

He has to fight

for his land.

Cloaked in black

his enemy stares.

And he's met

with mighty glares.

The warrior dies.

The enemy takes his leave

and soon there'll be no one

left to greive.


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nativepride
nativepride
06:54 Dec 31 2008

i love it. its true and yet dark well i see it like that.its calming to hear at the same time.





Sithiliar
Sithiliar
07:02 Dec 31 2008

Thanx! I always try my best when writing a poem or a story and i love doing them about the past. Its also cool to hear that its calming. :P





RaineyLustfulBites
RaineyLustfulBites
20:50 Jun 02 2009

Like it too love the imagery I got





 

A Salem Witch Burning

03:10 Dec 31 2008
Times Read: 637


Condemed to death

she walks in a daze.

They tie her to the stake

and she silently pray's.

They start the fire

and all she can see

is twisted faces

smiling in glee.

Her skin burns

as the flames grow

she looks to the sky

she see's a crow.

The pains too much

and death is near.

There's nothing she can do

she screams in fear.

She slowly dies.

The crowd cheers.

They leave to celebrate

with friends and beers.



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nativepride
nativepride
06:56 Dec 31 2008

its dark and so true for to me its how people are today yet not at the stack they are called names and picked on for they are differnt. i love it 5 gold stars





Sithiliar
Sithiliar
06:59 Dec 31 2008

Thanks. I wrote this poem after reading a book on the Salem Witch Trials. the book made me really really mad though and I was happy to find out in real life the main characters mom hadn't really died. the book was based off a true story but they'd twisted the end.



Ya I can see how it can be linked to the now. Some people are judged by others and hurt for no reason.





 

No Escape

03:09 Dec 31 2008
Times Read: 638


Into the fields

she tries to escape.

She tries to hide

so she wears a cape.

The sound of howls

and angry shouts.

She's scared to death,

but ignores her doubts.

She trips and falls

and hurts her leg.

The men attack her

and she starts to beg.

There is no hope

the dogs attack.

She cannot fight

she's never coming back.



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Sithiliar
Sithiliar
07:14 Dec 31 2008

I wrote this really quick for my Creative Writing class. Its really as the tital says. Its about a girl trying to escape from people who want to kill her and they kill her.





 

A Deadly Lie

03:08 Dec 31 2008
Times Read: 639


Golden eyes

that glow in the dark.

They watch you run

and are followed with a bark.

You stop and listen

then turn around.

You see the beast

and scream aloud.

You try to run,

but fall instead.

In your last moments

you think of what he said:

"Come to me

late at night.

Do not worry

I will not bite..."


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Sithiliar
Sithiliar
07:15 Dec 31 2008

This was for a halloween poem I had to do. Pretty much its about a werewolf who told a girl to meet him at night and she does and dies.





RaineyLustfulBites
RaineyLustfulBites
20:54 Jun 02 2009

sweet reminds me of blood and chocolate :)

I have add you to my favorites

feel free to add me to your friend list but message me so that I may do the same =)





 

A Never To Be Love

03:07 Dec 31 2008
Times Read: 640


I love you so,

but I'm so shy.

I wish to express my feelings,

but I'd surely die.

My heart breaks,

whenever I see you.

For I know,

that I can never be with you.


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Sithiliar
Sithiliar
07:19 Dec 31 2008

I know this is going to sound really stupid and girly but this poem is about the guy I like. I see him all the time at school and he totally ignores me! Not to long ago I really thought he liked me but now I don't know anymore...





 

Warning In A Dream

03:07 Dec 31 2008
Times Read: 641


She sleeps on her bed,

dreaming of a past forgotten.

She stands in an orchard,

the fruit's all rotten.

She looks around

and see's a prince.

She knows him from her childhood,

but she hasn't seen him since.

He climbs down from his horse

and gives her hand a kiss.

Somethings not right,

she feels no bliss.

The prince backs away

and then dissapears.

Everything goes dark

and she's assualted by her fears.

A demon crawls up from the ground

and in his mouth is a bloody bone.

She screams as she falls to the ground

and wakes up to find that she's not alone...





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Sithiliar
Sithiliar
07:23 Dec 31 2008

This I didn't even think or plan. I just kept writing and this is what turned out. Its about a girl having a good dream then it suddenly all goes bad and she wakes up to find that she's not alone any more in her room.





RaineyLustfulBites
RaineyLustfulBites
20:52 Jun 02 2009

very good not everything is what it seems to be

very forklore keep it up





 

Promise to Protect

03:06 Dec 31 2008
Times Read: 642


Taking the blame,

I hold my head up high.

They yell and scream

and I try not to cry.

When they're angers spent

and they have nothing more to say.

I go to my room

and try to keep the tears at bay.

The pains so intense,

but I don't want her to worry.

So I try to sleep

and the pain I burry.

I am the shield

and the protector.

I have to be,

because I promised to always protect her.


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Sithiliar
Sithiliar
07:30 Dec 31 2008

This poem I actually wrote about my past and still partial present. I lived with my grandma for a while and she'd always get really pissed off at me for my grades. Since its something i felt she had a right to be angry at me for I took it all and when she saw that I wasn't bothered by her yelling at me or anything she'd start freaking out on my sister when she got perfect grades and never did anything wrong. I'd always end up trying to comfort my sis and I'd always promise her it wouldn't happen again and I'd try to protect her.... I'm a crappy protector though and there was nothing I could really do unless I wanted to make things worse....





 

Angelic Savior

03:05 Dec 31 2008
Times Read: 643


The rain washes away my tears

And the sorrow in my heart suddenly clears.

The rain stops as suddenly as it had started

And I stare down at my wound that had smarted.

The pain is gone, washed away by the rain.

The beast that had hurt me lays on the ground slain.

My hero turns swiftly to leave

And he has wings which I just can’t believe.

I watch him go and fly away

And I wish I’d known sooner what to say.


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Sithiliar
Sithiliar
07:34 Dec 31 2008

I was day dreaming when this popped into my head and when I woke up I just had to write it down!








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