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2 entries this month
 

Enraptured By The Prey

08:24 Jul 20 2009
Times Read: 778


I'm staring at the cross

As you run your fingers

Down my skin

Past my neck

To my bare stomach

My heart's running wild

As you hover over me

Too afraid to look

Into those onyx eyes

I expected them to be cold

Instead I found warmth

Security wrapped

Deep into the unknown

Your fangs, a reminder

Of the identity you behold

You entrance me

With your smile

Your rich laughter

That fills the void

Deep within

My eyes are fixated

By the silver cross

My savior looking down

As I struggle to balance

Pleasure and pain

Death and life

I know my blood's calling you

Enticing you to do it

To just have a taste

Of the adrenaline charged blood

Your hand is swift

As you lift it from my navel

The trance is broken

I am no longer your slave

You avoid my gaze

Disappointment clear

Panic showing on your face

What will you do now

If you can't kill your prey?


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littleimp
littleimp
06:14 Jul 21 2009

this one is very good , you have the makeing of a writer.





caaeivl
caaeivl
08:03 Apr 04 2010

i like it. a vampire with a conscience.





caaeivl
caaeivl
07:04 Jul 28 2010

i took the liberty of reading your very 1st poetry post and your most recent, to see the progression.



you have talent.





 

Love's Promise

17:31 Jul 19 2009
Times Read: 783


The poison in your heart

Spreading through your veins

Fixing you to your place

It’s a venom

That knows no bounds

Love will crush you

Destroy you from within

Rip out your happiness

Leaving you bleeding

On the dirty floor

As people watch

The unfolding of this tragedy

A show for the world

To watch and enjoy

Love’s promise

Will be your demise


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Lordpeace
Lordpeace
06:31 Aug 13 2009

love's promise can be your demise or your saviour i like your writing and am glad to see you back to it

feel free to visit my journals





SaintNoMore
SaintNoMore
18:57 Jan 28 2010

That's for damn sure.








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