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Darkened Power

23:12 Apr 28 2017
Times Read: 156


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In a darkened Forest a ritual was taking place of darkened intentions, Untold evil could be felt throughout this Forest a group of unknown individuals we're trying to raise a demon named alorah. Only the children of those who summoned the demon can fight the evil that had been awakened can they survive will they be killed can you find a way to resolve the demons and monsters coming from the Crators many children all throughout this world well wake up to Powers that they do not understand can they be be gathered all together and learn how to control these Powers before it's too late.



Part one.... Alorah........



The forest was as dark as the night, the trees, and wind seem to have a life of it's own. This forest not many people travel to or threw, only because the voices of the dead could be Hurd threw the wrestling wind.



As the wind began to pick up, light chants could be coming deep from within. A darkened force presence could be felt with the tension in the air, something evil was beginning to awaken. The chants begun to get louder, as seven people stood around a crater in the middle of the forest.



The leader a young woman standing at the top of the crater, her followers kneeling all around the crater. Many people were tied, and gaged laying within the crater. As the woman had her hands in the air, the six were chanting in a unknown language.



The woman took out a knife, cutting into her hand. "Accept this offering, with the sacrifices, and awaken to destroy this world great Demon Alorah!" The blood leaked down Into the crater seeping Into the foiled dirt.



The ground begun to shake, mist seeping up threw the dirt. The woman, and her followers begun to chant louder. Each one of her followers, cutt into there palms. The blood moved all around the crater, forming into a pentagram. Clouds started to form, as lightning and thunder could be Hurd.



The mist started to get thicker, forming all threw the forest. The evil presence began to get stronger, the ground begun to part the shaking getting stronger.



"Awake, and bring your destruction upon this world!" She began to laugh, then all of a sudden she Hurd a scream from one of her followers. She came to a stop, as the others stopped chanting.



Another screamed out, then another. All that could be Hurd was silence, all her followers were dead. The smell of blood, and death flooded the forest.



A woman walked from the shadows, naked and covered in blood. Her skin was black with a demonic tattoo going up her chest, her horns were long and sharp. "You dare awaken me, and offer trash as sacrifices! I did have a great great dinner after century's of being locked away. And now I shall have you for desert."



A spark of lightning struck the ground as a man appeared, the demonic woman growled lowly bending down. "You! How dare you appear here!" The man raised his hand to the Demon. "Be silent Alorah, you shall not have this woman." He forced her back down Into the ground, the ones tired Being freed and allowed to flee.



He turned to the woman, as she backed up from him. "Do you even know what you have done here?" The man raised his hand, the Crators closing up. "You did not just waken one demon, you awoke every monster this world fears. I have done what I can to seal them up, it will last for some years. But they well break lose, and kill anything that gets in there way. He raised his hand to her, now I will bestow a curse upon your blood line. When your children grow to realise there powers, they well rally those who have powers to fight against the army of evil beings bent on wiping out your race."



She felt a jolt of electricity flow threw her body as she dropped to her knees, her fingers digging Into the ground. The man vanished as quick as he arrived, "How dare you! We will see, I will lock them away from the world. This world will die! I will see to it."



She stood to her feet, looking around as the mist dispersed to see her friends dead one after another. "I am sorry, I did not expect this to happen that old woman lied to me." She made her way from the forest out onto a dirt road were a group of horses were waiting, mounting her horse she road off pulling the others behind her.



Back at the crater, dirt was shifting the ground it's self rose as a hand appeared Alorah began to pull her self from the ground. "You can't keep me locked away now, Mason." She walked over to one of the dead men, pulling his Cloak from his body. She brushed the dirt off her self, throwing the cloak over her shoulders.



She walked out of the forest, taking the form of a young woman. "Time to explore, wonder if there is a village nearby." She began walking down the road taking in her surroundings with excitement, "Maybe I can live a normale life here."





To be continued.......


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Ancients From Nassara (Book One)

22:56 Apr 28 2017
Times Read: 167


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A young man comes to check out a falling star, but in his surprise he finds a young girl in need of help. We're did she come from, and how did she just fall from the sky. But before he could ask here came seven more falling from the sky. They find them self's being hunted, can they get to safety, a Bond begins to grow between them but can there love survive threw the chase. Can they defeat the ones who want her dead, what will happen what will be and who will win, can they be together or are they doomed to fail.



Nothing is real, fantasy... Thank you for reading. Please tell me your opinions, or if I need to fix anything.





Part one.....The girl and Her pursuers...

A young man was making his way down a dirt path, along a forest. The sun was slowly setting behind him, as he walked further and further, it became darker and darker. He came to a stop noticing the half moon, he started too look around finding a thick long stick. He took some cloth, and oil from his pack, he had made him self a torch. He placed the end of the stick into the ground, looking threw his pack. Pulling out two weird looking rocks, both were smooth and a bit sharp.



Slowly hitting one rock against the other over the torch, he did this four times. On the force attempt a spark launched, and the oil cought on fire. He placed the rocks into his pack, picking up the torch continuing on his way.

"I need to hurry, it can get dangerous out here at night."



He continued down the dirt path, the torch lighting his way. He could see several feet in front of him, and behind him. He was making his way to a nearby village, "Sarrin? It's just another job, packages and letters to be delivered. Should be coming on the village soon, I need to hurry."



He began to pick up the pace, the boxes weighing him down. He pulled out a canteen of water, taking a few sips then putting it back into his pack.



All of a sudden a light appeared in the sky, "maybe a falling star?" The light began to grow brighter almost Blinding. A loud bang could be Hurd, as the light crashed into the ground. A wave of strong air and dust knocked him off his feet. "Damn! That was a surprise, now I'm curious to what it was that hit."



He got to his feet, taking up his torch. Making his way to the area, he saw the light hit. He came upon a massive crater, there he spotted a young girl hovering just above the ground. She was uncounsois, he wondered if she was the cause, his eyes never leaving her. "What is this feeling? I just want to protect her, hold her in my arms. Could this be love at first sight?"



The a loud sound started him, as he turned to see seven bright lights falling out of the sky. Some were hitting around them, he took action. Sliding down Into the crater, she dropped into his arms. " I will not leave you here all alone, I will protect you." He took her and ran off down the dirt path, leaving the torch behind.



Seven figures stood at the crater the girl made, six seemed to crowed around one as if it was there leader. It rose it's hand, as the all scattered in all directions.



The girl started to awaken, as he came to a stop sitting her down against a tree. He began to check her for wound's. "Good, she don't seem to be hurt." She came too, looking around herself then to him. He kneeled down to her, "are you alright?"



She let out a scream, pushing him away. She looked scared, as she cling to the tree. He feel onto his behind, blinking up at her. "I mean you no harm, I am sorry if I scared you."



She began to calm Down, looking him over speaking in a unique dialect that he could not understand. He sat to his knees, looking at her. "I dont understand what your saying."



She frowned looking away, then she offered her hand to him. He placed her hand Into his, he then Hurd her voice in his head. "My name is Casey, you should leave me here. It's dangerous to be around me, others of my kind want me dead."



He shook his head, looking into her eyes. "My name is Lotus, and I have already made my mind up to protect you. You need help, and I won't abandon you to whoever is out for you." Her eyes went wide in surprise, as she had a slight blush to her cheeks. "Thank you, Lotus. But I still don't want to see you hurt, because of me." He smiled, picking her up in his arms carrying her down the dirt road.

"I'm not worried about it, I will take you to Sarrin. If you want to part ways after, so be it Casey."



He carried her threw the night, down the dirt path. She was taking in her surroundings, her eyes moving all-around them, while whimpering knowing they were hunting her. He looked down to her noticing her worry, "don't worry darling. I will not let anyone harm you, in a way." Her eyes went to his, with a blush. "Even so, I do not want you to get hurt becouse of me." He shook his head, taking a rest with her in his lap. "You should worry about your self, even so I can't leave you out here by your self. My sister would never forgive me, so I am going to protect you."



The two sat there, the cool breeze softly kissing there faces. She was staring up at Lotus, curious to why he is so kind. Lotus stared at the half moon, surrounded by blinking stars. His eyes met hers as he whispered, "so beautiful!" She blushed looking away.



"Alright let's get going, I'm rested now." He took her up into his arms, moving down the dirt road once more. She closed her eyes, feeling safe with him.



The figures moved threw the forest in all directions as if they were Animals, each hunting the girl. One popped out of the bushes as he jumped onto a dirt path, Lotus stood there watching the man sniff the air like a animal then to look at them.



Casey pulled on his shirt, lotus looked to her. "Run!" The figure spoke in Casey's, unique dialect as Lotus took off into the forest.



The figure let out a screech it was so loud, as Lotus stumbled around trying his hardest to get away from the creature.







Part two....The pursuers....





The leader, and the others stopped in there tracks once they Hurd the echos of the screech. Each took off into the direction it came from, "the others are on there way Lotus! Get away from here, quickly run. They will kill you!"



She jumped from his arms, running off in another direction. Lotus spotted the creature dart after her, "Damn it, what would they do in this situation." He ran off after the creature, and Casey.



He spotted Casey in a corner, as the creature was closing in on her. She looked over to Lotus, "I told you to run!" Lotus ran over jumping in front of Casey. "I dont know what you just said, but I'm not going to run away and let this thing kill you."



Her heart began to race, she put her hand over her heart thinking to her self. "What is this feeling?" She looked to him, he was standing there holding a small dagger.



The creature stood up straight, eyeing the young man as he tilted his head. He could see the fear in the man's eyes, but he was showing such bravery. The figure spoke, but Lotus could not understand his words.



The others were running swiftly threw the darkened forest, dodging trees and rocks along the way.



The creature ran toward Lotus, grabbing his arm. As he could hear the creatures voice in his mind, "back down! We are only here for the princess, Creatures Mistress wishes her dead."



Lotus looked down to the creature, then to Casey. "I will protect her with my own life, sorry about this." Lotus took the creature by the arm, pulling and tossing the creature to the side. He then grabbed Casey by the hand, running away with her.



"I told you I'd protect you, I'm not going to run away!" Casey was speachless, as she was pulled forced to run behind Lotus.



The creature flipped to all fours sniffing the air, then ran off chasing after the two of them. He spotted the two running threw some trees, as he darted off after them.



Lotus pulled Casey behind some rocks, as he pushed her down with his arm wrapped around her. "Let him pass, we can get back on the road." She was blushing lightly, grabbing onto his sleeve.



The creature walked by sniffing the ground, he Hurd a nose coming from behind him. Running off towards to noise, Lotus slowly pulled Casey from behind the rock. "Back to the road, we shouldn't be far from Sarrin."



"Thank you Lotus, I don't know what I would have done with out you." She grabbed tighter on his hand, they managed to get back to the road. Lotus, pulled Casey behind him thinking on what he would do if stronger ones show up.



"I am sorry that I am not stronger, I k ow you ran off to protect me." He came to a stop, turning​ to her as he kneeled down. "I am here to protect you, I won't let nothing hurt you. I promise! Even if it means, dying to let you escape."



She gasped, covering her mouth as she backed away. But he grabbed her wrist, pulling her back toward him. "No! You will not die, I won't let that happen again. Please promise me, you wont let them kill you just to protect me."



He smiled down to her, patting her head. "I promise!" He had his fingers crossed behind his back, she looked happy as he closed her eyes when he patted her head.



"Once we get to Sarrin, can I stay with you Lotus?"



He smiled after hearing what she said his heart began to race, "Yes I would enjoy that." The two held hands moving down the dirt road quickly, lotus suddenly yanked Casey Into the bushes.



"Damn! We took too much time back there, your hunters managed to get ahead of us Casey" she whimpered watching them move around. Her hand on his wrist, "what are we going to do Lotus?"



"Let's try to sneak around them." Casey nodded, as she followed him deep into the forest. They came upon a glistening lake, the two made there way around it. "I don't​ like coming this far, there are rumors of feral people living out here." Casey gripped his wrist tighter, "feral?" He pulled her closer. "Those who live in the wilderness, and turn to Animal instincts. They will attack, or watch you."



She cling to his side, gripping his shirt. "And I thought they were bad enough." He chuckled patting her on the head, "Don't worry they won't attack us." Lotus spotted a clearing once they got past the lake, "ah here we are, were not far from Sarrin.

Now."



The creature cought up with the others, as the group of figures spoke to one another. The creature cought a whiff of the two, he began to growl following the scent to were the two had hidden themselves.



The creature howled to get the attention of the others, the leader walked up and kneeled down to him. She spoke to him, then rose her hand as the creature shot off into the forest.



Lotus made his way with Casey, threw the meadow. "It's so beautiful here, I love coming threw here." Casey gripped his wrist tightly, taking g in her surroundings with a smile on her face. "It is beautiful, too bad were in a hurry."



Part three.....Death and awakening​.....

Lotus came to a stop, pulling Casey toward him. He bent down picking up a few wild flowers, handing them to her. "We can enjoy a moment of peace!"



She let out a soft giggle, sniffling the flowers while staring at him. "Thank you, Lotus. You're so kind, I am happy you were the one to find me."



The creature stood there, lightly growling his grace never leaving the two of them.

Lotus offered her his hand with a smile, she took it looking up to him seeing his smile had turned to dread. "No!" Casey turned to see the creature standing there.



The creature stood there on all fours, growling angerly at the two. Lotus turned to run with Casey, but as he did another figure stood in his way shaking his head.



Lotus stopped in his tracks, Casey's back pressed to his. "What are we going to do, Lotus?" He eyed the man infront of him, as he reached a d grabbed Casey's hand. "Stay at my side, I won't let them hurt you."



Lotus closed his eyes and breathed in deeply, gripping Casey's hand tight. Then he yanked her infront of him, she cried out being picked up in his arms taking off to the left.



The two figures dashed after them on both sides, Lotus could only run straight threw. He then stopped suddenly as the two overlapped them, he then ran Into the forest as fast as he could trying to lose them.



Lotus jumped down a steep hill, sliding and trying to keep his Ballance. "Becarful Lotus, don't hurt your self!" Lotus was too busy trying to stay on his feet, as he Hurd a loud commotion behind him.



Soon as came to the end of the hill, jumping a few miles away. He then ran as fast as he could, not even looking back. Casey whined out loudly, Lotus was only preoccupied with protecting her.



The creature rolled down the hill hitting the ground, one arm broken but still chasing after them. Lotus shifted Casey so she could not see behind them, "I have a problem Casey." She had her arms wrapped around him, her face tucked into his neck. "What problem Lotus?"



He was breathing heavily, slowing down every second be continued to run. "I am getting tired quickly, my energy is failing me. Soon I will have to face those who chase you, I might not be able to keep that promise after all."



The creature had cought up to the two, but he was now rolling down the hill violently. "What's happening back there, Casey?" She was watching the creature roll down the hill, as she realised once Lotus gets to the ground the creature would attack. "Lotus once we get to the bottom, you need to jump away and run quickly."



"No you won't die, not to protect me. I won't let you, I can't let that happine again." Lotus kissed her on the check to calm her, "look it's worth it dying for someone you think is worth protecting."



He came to stop, placing Casey in front of a tree. He walked away from her, "no matter what happens you run, run as fast as you can I'll do my best to hold them back."



She stood there crying, watching him walk toward the half/wolf/half man creature. Lotus ran toward the creature quickly, but as he did the second figure came from his blind spot hitting him hard in the side of the head. Lotus stumped back, falling to the ground.



The figure stood there, looking toward the creature. He spoke in his dialect, while Lotus was getting to his feet. The creature leaped at him, his claws piercing threw lotus's chest.



Lotus coughed up blood onto the Creatures face, as it pulled his hand from him. Casey screamed out in disparity, watching the horrifying scene take places in front of her.



Her eyes went dark purple, wind and fire began to swirl around her. She was furious, for now a second person had was going to be killed in front of her.



Lotus fell to the ground hard, his breathing shallow the creature had pierced his heart. "Run away Casey! Don't worry about me, just run!" Casey forced the two back just by slashing her arm, the back lash of the wind forcing the two to retreat.



The wind only soothed Lotus his pain was fading, he began to grow cold. "Get to safety!" He whispered out faintly. Now laying in a pool of his own blood, Casey turned to see he was no longer moving. "Lotus!" She walked over to him kneeling down shaking him gently. "You promised me you would not let them kill you, Lotus wake up. LOTUSSSS!!!!" She knew he was dead, as she kneeled there crying over his body.



Her tears were falling down onto his body, clinging to him. "I wish I could give you power, revive you. But I don't know how, I give my heart to you."



One she spoke those words a light shines from her chest, as lotus's body began to Glow a dark blueish purple. The light seeped out of Casey's chest, then instantly shot into lotus's​ body. "A pact, I form with you Lotus. The two of us will now be connect, our fates as one. I give my powers to you, my guardian. Half of my heart, to replace your damaged heart now and forever connected to one another."



Lotus's​ body continued to Glow in the same light, growing darker and darker. A pulse starting to shoot threw his body and Into the surrounding area every 5 seconds, Lotus got to his feet as power exploded from him screaming up while his wounds healed flames eating the edges of his shirt and pants.



He stood there calming down, staring at his hands. His eyes going over to Casey, she was staring at him in tear not able to believe her eyes. "It worked, I am so glad your okay Lotus." He blinks his eyes looking were he received the wound, patting out the flames. "I feel different, but how am I alive?" Casey jumped up taking his hand pulling him to a puddle of water gently cleaning the blood from his body.



Part four.....Lotus renewed.....

Casey finished cleaning Lotus of the blood, "I gave you half of my heart. I used a old secret ritual that is only known by my family, the pact of transferring power. Now you are stronger, and can call upon my powers. I've chosen you as my guardian, you have my heart now so we are connected, bonded, if you die, I die and vice versa."



Lotus listened to her not really understanding what she was saying, but he had one thing. "In other words, our fates are intertwined. Were you go, I must follow." Casey nodded her head to him, "yes. I am just glad it worked, Lotus."



Lotus clenched his hands together feeling power circulate threw his body. "I can take those two on now, I want to test myself on them." Casey watched him move around as he realised his new strength, "I think we should keep going."



Lotus looked over to her, noticing the look of worry on her face. "You're body is not used to this power yet, if you over use it you will be vulnerable."



Casey walked over to him gripping his wrist tightly, "please!?" He took her by the hand nodding to her. "Let's go Casey," the two of the continued toward Sarrin.



The two figures made there way back to the others, they spoke for few moments. Soon after all seven ran into the forest, going after Lotus, and Casey.











To be Continued......







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DaDaDaDaBatman
DaDaDaDaBatman
23:22 Apr 28 2017

Very job well done, I Enjoyed reading your story and i think you should continue it on.





ladyfae
ladyfae
05:01 May 04 2017

Bravo. Well-paced and I'm intrigued to read more.








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