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The Rain

22:37 Aug 06 2017
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This may not exactly be poetry so whatever. I'm not good with English.

The sky weeps cleansing rain again,
That's when the daydreams begin,
I love the rain most but not on this day,
The Rain makes my mind decay,
Emotions from no where rise,
Of things long past distant cries,
The Rain helps me sleep,
Blocked is my rest by the feelings my heart keeps,
The Rain runs along my skin,
Cold, damp, just water as it's made mind walls thin,
The Rain in the past helped me dance threw it's falling sheets,
Naked, bare , I could bathe in its heat,
But not today, today, today,
Feels like the sound of a horses dying may,
Today I hate the rain,
Now I feel ashamed,
The Rain always loved me,
The Rain was what brought me he,
He who plaques my every waking hour,
What am I looking for?
The Rain knows but is it love, sex, power,
I don't know.
It's not simple this today's rain,
It brings with it pain,
What the used to keep going if nothing is appearing to cleanse the distain?

Aweful thing I just wrote. I don't feel very good today. I know I love the rain but today I wish it's move away.


COMMENTS

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Kataryia
Kataryia
19:23 Aug 19 2017

Powerful





brokenxhearted
brokenxhearted
14:51 Aug 22 2017

you have the makings of a great poet





NOKTURNL
NOKTURNL
16:50 Dec 22 2019

Nice work indeed








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