I only wanted, what was best for you, my intentions out reached my heart , what started out as friends, blossomed into someing, my heart couldnt handle. as my heart burst there was blood in the wind. did you taste it as ower last kiss excaped your mind as if it was nothing.its a pity.... our friendship died as did your feelings, when you next feel a fall mist on your face..... taste it.... its my hearts blood......... RIFF
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jasmyne
19:49 Nov 09 2009
this is lovely, much like something i would write.
Lunalessca
00:47 Nov 25 2009
Beautiful and sad too.
Selenas
08:12 Nov 27 2009
whoa.....deep, sad. You are a wonderful poet.
gothgodess
21:34 Dec 03 2009
I see I am not the only one to be burnt pretty bad lately. I know how it feels my friend and I wish this feeling upon nobody.