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5 entries this month
 

Poem FIVE

20:25 Oct 25 2007
Times Read: 611


"I think about the darkness,until it is my being,



No one knows the darkness,that my eye's are seeing,



but everyone has the darkness,deep inside their soul.



Are you to scared to let it out,do you fear the toll.



You can see the magic ,if you just knew the sign.



It can make a mortal human,into something quite divine



The witches raise their Atheme, the wizards raise their staff.



The ritual starts to heighten,we all will dance and laugh.



Soon you'll see the signs,of magic; all around.



As i chant my spell,raise my sword and thrust it in the ground"


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Poem FOUR

15:58 Oct 10 2007
Times Read: 616


"See a man upon a cross; a twisted,tortured soul.



Only a man,not a god; he played the Martyr role.



Did he hear his father calling? Do you believe the lie.



Just a man,without a god; left alone to die.





The world will burn in eternal flame.



Jesus is the one to blame.



As flames are burning through your skin.



Remember.Jesus didn't die for your sin.







Hanging from the cross, he cries"father thy will be done"



He hears a voice from heaven" I know you not my son"



And as his soul begins to leave,and sweat runs down his face



He realized,it's all for not; He cant save the human race."



:(


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Poem THREE

08:38 Oct 05 2007
Times Read: 618


"Enter the church of the one who is dammed

heavens wide open, the gates have been rammed

I walk through these gates with a head in my hand

it belongs to the god who has flourished your land

an angel of heaven I was born up above

my spirits in churches,delivering love

but temptations knocking and i heed the call

now I stand judgment; refusing to fall

into the fire,submerged in the flame

enter the kingdom.the devils the kings name

off in the distance its angels I see

could these be my brothers,cause they look just like me

dancing like madmen,screaming my name

beckoning me to come join in their game"


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Poem TWO

19:54 Oct 03 2007
Times Read: 623


"born on a field of battle,

gorge myself on blood and on flesh

killing inferiors like helpless cattle,

standing knee deep in a slaughter house mess.

my ax doesn't shine cause blood paints it red

lifeless they fall as I sever their heads

kill all around me,until I'm the last

I must reign supreme as I've done in the past

reign is supreme, don't challenge my blade

I wade through an ocean of men that I've slain

nothing is sacred,but the blood that I spill

so raise up the war cry and move for the kill

join with your clan and take up to arms

raise up the war horns and sound the alarms

remember our homeland and the blood that was spilled

in the days of the valiant, when our kinsman where killed

unleash the war machine

see the steel and the silver gleam

hear the sound of the war host roar

raise up the war cry; we're kicking down deaths door.



I call it "Born on a field of battle"

later priss."


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dracken
dracken
18:44 Jan 20 2010

So you're the homicidal axe weilding maniac : ) ... nice





Priss
Priss
01:39 Jan 21 2010

Nope...not my poem...it was sent to me years ago by someone who is no longer on VR...I believe he was attempting to woe me...lol





 

Poem ONE

19:50 Oct 03 2007
Times Read: 624


"Death comes and thats a fact

But follow me and you'll come back

there is no dark,there is no light

there is no path to choose thats right

there is no heaven,there is no hell

or other places your world books tell

but one things certain.All things end.

and time will tell,that deaths a trend

when death comes knocking.And it will

there'll be no warmth,from deaths cold chill

the reaper win's and thats a fact.

But follow me and you'll come back"



:D


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placidchaos
placidchaos
01:08 Feb 22 2008

I like your poetry, it intrigues me.








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