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The Vampire House

02:22 Dec 06 2006
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This is a story I wrote for a competition alled "Tales of Terror", we were supposed to write a scary story and so this was mine, and I was one of the winners.



The Vampire House



You’re walking with your friends,

And you see a haunted house,

You all sneak in,

Tip-toeing,

Quiet as a mouse,

As you walk farther in,

You all look around,

As you do you think,

“Oh look what we found”,

You walk through the house,

And explore every room,

What you didn’t know is,

That the house would cause your doom,

Then while you weren’t looking,

From out of the gloom,

Standing in the shadows next to the broom,

Spied a dangerous creature,

That would hunt and kill,

Until it ate,

It’s stomach’s fill,

“It’s safe here”,

You all assume,

Until you separate,

She will watch and loom,

And in fact you separate,

And go your different ways,

The creature thinks,

Here’s the end of your days,

One of your friends,

Wanders fairly far,

The creature stalks after,

And starts the blood bar,

From behind you,

You hear a blood curdling scream,

You tell your friends,

It’s not as bad as it may seem,

Everyone starts to panic,

Everyone wants to hide and run,

The creature has a bloody smirk,

“And here starts the fun”,

She goes after the next closest,

She starts to attack,

She has speed and agility,

That your friend does lack,

Right before your friend gets to you,

She starts to feast,

Since you were so close,

You see a vampire is the beast,

As you watch your friend get bit,

Your eyes go huge and wide,

And you think to yourself,

“WHERE THE HECK CAN I HIDE”,

You run and find,

A place to hide,

When you hear more screams,

You jump to the side,

You hear thumps and steps,

You hear a door slam,

As this happens you think,

“Oh how did I get in this jam”,

All is quiet,

And eerily calm,

All you can think as you leave your safe spot is,

“I want my mom”,

You walk around,

Wondering if everyone’s dead,

“You are going to die”,

That’s what your mind said,

You think to yourself,

“Oh no what am I going to do”,

Then quietly from behind you someone says,

“Boo…”


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