Loves Sweet Sting
The night was warm and the feelings intense
the mood was strong and without sense
his heart was beatng strong
hers was not feeling the wrong
his love had been there to see
his heart was open and free
her emotions were scattered
her skin battered
the day started happy and alive
but over time it decayed and died
his anger grew in leaps and bounds
her laughter came with all sorts of sounds
he felt her oblivious to his pain
now all that remained was sour rain
his heart lay broken, drowned from within
oh how poetic, loves sweet sting
COMMENTS
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PsychWardSiren
21:38 Aug 08 2011
Love is bitter sweet sorry to say. Both parties tend to get hurt....some just better at hiding it. But still one must move on without giving up on the chance of new love or renewed love.