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Thank you: I'll Miss You (4/26/2017)

03:40 Apr 27 2017
Times Read: 420


You've always treated me

like I was family

You saw the best in me,

even though at times

for me it wasn't always

clear to see



You always took the time

to sit and talk,

you never once told me

to take a walk



To hear now that I'm losing you

it's hard to believe the news is true

I don't know what to do

I don't have a single clue



I wish I was there to see you

I just wouldn't know what to say

I wish you were okay

There's just so much that

I would like to repay



You took me in and treated me

like I your own son

Never once condoning things

that I have done



You're are a second mom to me

being a part of your family

makes me happy

I wish there was something

that I could do

I wish that I didn't have to

lose you too



Mom, I just wanted to let you know

how grateful I am to have met you

You taught me how to look at life

in different view

For everthing you have done

Thank you

I love you and I'll miss you


COMMENTS

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BloodMoonMystic
BloodMoonMystic
03:53 Aug 01 2017

Wonderfully written...brought tears
.well said





Elizabethbathory33
Elizabethbathory33
20:36 Aug 13 2017

That's a beautiful poem I am also truly sorry to hear your loss





Rupture
Rupture
04:10 Oct 27 2017

very nicely written





LadySekhmet
LadySekhmet
15:49 Oct 30 2017

REAL mothers, whether biological or not, will always be the greatest gifts of life... I'm sorry for your loss, and may she will live on in your heart... Forever.





Kataryia
Kataryia
01:20 Nov 09 2017

wipes tears away ..enuff said.





 

I Miss You 4/4/2017

08:43 Apr 04 2017
Times Read: 481


Are you here or there

or nowhere at all?

Did I even get to know you?

Was anything that you said

even true?



I've been asking myself this

a lot as of late

but the only answers

I seem to find

I'd rather sedate



I'm not sure if its me

or just something in my head

I wish I had more time with you

instead of leaving things unsaid



It's funny, silence bothers me

You're the only one I want to see

and yet I know deep down

that can never be



I want to ask, where were you

when I needed you?

but that just me being selfish

'cause I know there was

nothing you could do



After all, you're there and I'm here

there's no middle ground,

not even for you to lend me an ear

or even make a sound



I miss you more than words

could ever say

you're my first and last thoughts

of the day



I wish I could say that this

feeling's getting better

but I can't even send you

one dam letter



Was it wrong of me for wanting

to get to know you?

Is it something that I did

or is this just a punishment due?



I guess I shouldn't complain

I at least got to talk to you

on the phone

and to be honest, what little

time I spent with you,

I never felt alone


COMMENTS

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Toxicbite29
Toxicbite29
11:24 Apr 04 2017

Wow, that is a very deep and heart felt poem..... made me tear up and I don't know why... Well written.






shynne
shynne
01:36 Apr 05 2017

I can relate to this 100% ..it's almost as if I wrote it.





littleflames
littleflames
15:09 Apr 25 2017

the words are true and to the point .








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