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a poem

03:59 Nov 30 2009
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Take this grain of crystal

So small and fragile

It is all that is left

Of what used to be my heart



Broken one time to many

Each time someone taking a piece

This little grain is all that is left

Of what used to be my heart



Once it was strong

And beat ferociously

With all the love and passion a person could stand

And then it became cracked

Chipped slowly away

Till it became this one little grain



Here take this grain of crystal

I give it to you willingly

It's all that's left

Of what used to be my heart



Maybe you can make it grow

Maybe you will throw it away

Still I will give it to you willingly

All that is left of what used to be my heart


COMMENTS

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Iyesta
Iyesta
05:15 Nov 30 2009

Very well writing I think. You express your emotions well through out the whole poem.





sippa
sippa
02:59 Dec 10 2009

heavy taps the fickle finger of fate



but hope remains....there is always hope








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