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"Apparition"



ghostly fingers trace my scalp, tangle in my hair

lips part, eyes close, chest aches

I feel you. I reach out to you. I feel you.

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Joli
19:32 Apr 07 2011

...caught in the grip of familiarity

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AuroraEve
01:34 Aug 17 2011

Wants to know more

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Joli
09:38 Nov 09 2024

After waking from a nightmare, my imagination is on high alert. I actually shivered re reading this

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This has been sitting on ice for months now, waiting to be rounded out in some flash of inspiration. That doesn't seem imminent, so I'm tossing it up (heh) as is.



We'll see if I can get the formatting to hold.



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fair warning: ye whose moistened lips grow full 


	and part for tongue-tip flicks,


who feel red softness, plump and moist,


release hot breath, mouth dark and slick


(and welcoming)


	for savors sipped


	for sly tastes slipped


	(in slithers, drowsy-smooth and deep)


		in welcome-kiss


		on breath-drawn bliss


		with gasp


	and sussurating hiss





...of weaving-reeds in baskets round...


	a reed-weave mesh 


	brushed up against...


by weaving song of reed-pipe sound...


	a willow-tone 


	brushed up against...


by weaving sway


by formless drift


	of word-silk sound


		as word-sounds shift

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Joli
19:31 Apr 07 2011

This is so delicious to read aloud while listening to the soft and delicate sounds that transition along a ribbon of imagery.

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AuroraEve
01:36 Aug 17 2011

I loved it bravo balisimo ;) wants more

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Amanda
07:05 Aug 26 2011

Is it wrong to feel horny when I read this?

Impressive work, or play, whatever.

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