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Bits and Pieces

05:36 Jan 12 2011
Times Read: 609


Take it out of my chest

Drop it down with all the rest.

Stamp on it and make it dust.

Rob me, every second left, of Lust.



Take away my heart. Break it into bits.

Cut it into slivers and crush those with your fist.

Take away my heart. Scatter all the pieces.

Grind them into powder and tell no one the reason.



You can’t have it all your way.

So you decide your nerves are frayed.

You take that knife out of my heart.

You smile as you tear me apart.



And take away my heart. Break it into bits.

Cut it into slivers and crush those with your fist.

Take away my heart. Scatter all the pieces.

Grind them into powder and tell no one the reason.



The pain I have is just too much.

My love for you was not enough.

The love I craved so in return

Will be the reason that I burn.



Now take away my heart.

Break it into bits.

Cut it into slivers.

Crush those with your fist.

Take away my heart.

Scatter all the pieces.

Grind them into powder

I don’t need a reason...




This was a song I wrote years ago. Was going through my old stuff, deleting some things and reading old poetry and this was in a folder all on it's own called Bits and Pieces. So I'm adding it. It's not really a poem, it's a song but meh, can't rename my entries section so song won't be there. That and I've only written like one so it's all alone anyway. I like it and that's why I'm posting it. Nothing more, nothing less. Feel free to comment.

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ArmandII
ArmandII
21:18 Jan 12 2011

isnt this the one you showed me when we were friends for me to read and comment on? it sounds familar.





JustinDupree
JustinDupree
22:52 Jan 12 2011

For the most part yes. I have two versions of it. One version was a song and one was a poem.





DestroyingAngel
DestroyingAngel
10:22 Jan 17 2011

Good lord this is fucking gooood!





 

Never Die

03:14 Jan 12 2011
Times Read: 613


Forever and for always

Until the very end of days

Was nothing but a lie

Sweet make believe words for me to buy



For I've put in my soul

And in it you've punched a hole

They don't make a big enough cork

Nor is there enough torque



To seal the gaping wound

In a hundred afternoons

There won't be a scar

The ends are split apart to far



My love was all I had

All wrapped up for you to grab

But it wasn't enough for you

My heart inside coming unglued



But this is what I know

While I'm burning below

As you say the words goodbye

My love will never ever die

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Reunite

04:45 Jan 10 2011
Times Read: 621


This is not the beginning

This is not the end

Stop the lies you are spinning

Before we can amend



The words you said were so cruel

Empty and rude

Just the fire they fuel

Put the blaze out now before we conclude



We both know deep down

This wasn't the right road

Just look around

At the things you erode



The moment seemed right

No matter the weight

The unknown will excite

While denouncing your fate



Yet this ring on MY hand

Will never leave my sight

While my blood dries in the sand

We can still reunite

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Memories Abuse

06:01 Jan 09 2011
Times Read: 628


My aching bleeding heart

Been so long since we have talked

How have you been my friend

It's nice to speak to you again



I'm on the edge of it

Sinking into the darkest depth

How fairs the world for you

Does your bleeding not consume



The thoughts of every day

Or does your mind put it away

I ask you not to feel

It's better to pretend to heal



I beg you become numb

To the emptiness we must succumb

And to release the hardened skin

We'll share a fifth of gin



And watch our sorrows end

While our soul inside forgets to mend

I'll ante up the booze

If only you'll cease memories abuse

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Broken Heart

05:14 Jan 09 2011
Times Read: 634


I break out the duct tape

To fortify this mistake

My heart inside me missing parts

It needs much work before it'll start



To plug the holes you made

I cannot be afraid

Slowly without grace

I keep a turtle pace



To try and do this right

And make my heart beat again tonight

But there's so much devastation


So close now to annihilation



Yet I do the best I can

With what I have at hand

To create a decent shell

And keep my soul from going to hell



I hope the duct tape holds

To keep out all the cold

Maybe it can now restart

Don't fail me now my broken heart

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Soul Split

02:44 Jan 09 2011
Times Read: 636


I try to swallow it

The horrors you commit

With wrongs you won't admit

The burden is a perfect fit



And my dear you just won't quit

No advice will you permit

And no one will you omit

Yet my battle in transit



Dodging the evil words you spit

The knifes you throw I'm hit

My throat you aim to slit

Yet as I slowly sit



To weak I must submit

You begin a laughing fit

With this malice you emit

I fear my soul will split

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Transparent and See Through

12:25 Jan 01 2011
Times Read: 645


It seems you look right through me

Can't see me for what I am

For endlessly I long to be

More then just a herded lamb



I watch you from afar

You never look at me

This journey oh so hard

Why can't you ever see



That someone full of flaws

Riddled with emotional scars

Can love you more then any and all

To whom you shine brighter then the stars



I'm standing here alone

The sight could be no clearer

Your beauty more powerful then a cyclone

Yet as I look here in the mirror



My body has no form

I'm just another shadow

My soul may be yet warm

But it seems you'll never know



My face so plain and dark

I know not what I should do

As you see right past the mark

I'm so transparent and see through

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Greatest Treasure

11:56 Jan 01 2011
Times Read: 646


Pushed down deep it's not enough

My stomach feels like throwing up

The love from you was all I kept

Close to me yet still you swept



My legs out from under me

Telling me it's not meant to be

While I fall onto the floor

You say you don't love me anymore



With a shake of your head

You fill me with a river of lead

You even leave the gun

Your mission completely done



My body left laying in the den

As you walk out that door again

Yet as my heart pumps it's last beat

I can't comprehend your deceit



My soul was what I gave

Yet you made of me your slave

My lungs aching beyond measure

At the loss of my greatest treasure

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