I am wrung as dry
As the sands of creation
Before the skies wept.
COMMENTS
As silence echoes,
Fill your soul with love's calm grace,
Still, ever-present.
Drink from my well
of understanding
It is, quite deep.
That's amazing, but,
Haiku is five-seven-five,
Perhaps a retry?
I don't have a well
I have an impluvium
And a kayak too:D
COMMENTS
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Ockham
03:03 Jul 21 2008
These arrogant ears,
Hoping to receive one day,
A taste of your voice.
CTyler
16:14 Jul 24 2008
Din tanke flammer,
som en lys og varm fakkel,
I det mørke hav.