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A love story to begin...

23:38 Jan 10 2008
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First Id like to say this is a major rough draft and that there are tons of spelling errors and english errors etc etc, so please bear with me, also please, tell me what you think, write me a message and tell me what you think. : D



Hope you like it.



Please note: This is only the first part, Im gunna write more.



Its also easyer to read if you cut and paste it to like 2000 word or something being...Trust me.





I was standing in her room, just in the door way. Must have been around fiveish, and it was getting cold on that winter night. It was starting to get cold in her room too. She was standing there so innocently, next to the bed. The pink sheets and black covers laid out all over the messy bed. The night stand with an alarm clock, reading 5:09 P.M. in red lights. She looked so beautiful, tight blue jeans and a black "My Chemical Romance" Shirt. Black and white wrist bands, and a blue one with white words reading,” Your boy friends fakes it" Her golden cross. She was standing before me, brushing the hair out of her eyes. She smiled and my god...On her worst day, she was on another level, a level some would call heavenly. Words could never explain how she looked that night. I was just stunned, shocked, just as the first time I saw her, and every other time I saw her. I've almost never been speechless in my life but then, I've never seen an angel in my life eather, untill now that is.

I knew what I wanted to do, but I was so unsure of it all, unsure of myself, "Should I go for it?" I'd think to myself. I was looking for a sign, anything at all that said O.K. But then I saw it in her eyes. She looked down and away, smiling and laughing just a bit, like she does when she’s nerves.

I took a single step forward, and watched for a reaction. She looked up and smiled, her eyebrows arched just so. I kept moving, closer and closer, thoughts racing, closer and closer, my heart racing, pounding. The expression on her face stayed the same as I reach her. One step at a time, it felt like it was miles. I didn’t think, I only acted as I came to her. My hands sweating, thoughts still racing, I could almost hear my heart beating. The butterflys in my stomach.

My right arm reached around her, taking her in my arms, holding her just above her waist. Almost feeling sick, I looked down into her eyes. Gazing into them as my left hand rested on her shoulder. My head moving closer to hers, closing my eyes, the last thing I see is her closing her eyes. I used my arms to hold her close, to pull her closer and closer untill our lips meet and for that instant, time seemed to stand still. It was magic. Kissing her, my eyes closed, I could see, I could feel fireworks, I could see the stars. It just felt perfect. What was seconds, seemed to be hours, almost feeling an earthquake beneath our feet. Loving the taste of her cherry lip gloss. The feel of her soft lips. The hand on her shoulder sliding down her arm, taking her hand in mine. Easily, the sweetest moment of my short life. Her cool breath, breathing, almost made me smile. After what seemed to be hours, only really being seconds...Were I wish I could stay, our lips parted.

I slowly opened my eyes and looked at her, her eyes still closed, her mouth just open a bit, leaving her stunned. My heart skipped a beat as she grasped my hand, tighting her grip and a small smile came as she opened her eyes. I could have, I wanted too, stare her eyes for hours, the rest of the weekend, but we we're interrupted with a yell from a male voice coming form downstairs. "Tori!? Common down for dinner...Is your friend stayen for dinner or what?"

All I could do was smile as she smiled at me and started to tug, pulling me for the stairs with her worm hard. But right then and there all I could think about, was rather or not I would want to kiss anyone else other then this angel.

We almost ran down the dark stairway and halfway down she looked back at me and smiled at me, holding my hand a little harder just before letting go as we hit the bottom of the stair way.

My foot hit the carpet of the living room and saw the table with plates of food already set out. It only took a few seconds before the aroma of the "Chicken dinner" overtook me. I sat down in the chair next to the head of the table, her father at the head took his seat, as I watched tori work her way to the other side of the table, and I smiled when she was walking, looking down and away trying to hide her smile and her red blushing face.

I looked at the floor smiling, tring to hide my grin from her father, who was now studying my every move. Dinner was good. The chicken was great. But then, my attention was else where though. I couldn't help look into her eyes and smile every so often, thinking of our kiss. I never looked right at her for more then a second, nerves sitting right next to her father, and also being careful about the little game of footsie we played under the table.

We cleared our plates and she looked at me. "Wanna play games?", She asked in a cheerful voice. I responded, “Sure!" Just as happy with a little bit of sarcasm in my voice. She smiled as she headed for the other room and I flowed her out.

We came in and she turned the light out, and the I pomped myself on the couch in frount of the T.V. as she went to a stack of games, deciding what to play. "So you say you’re pretty good at Vice City...Why don’t ya show me, or were you just talken shit again?" She was going though the two player games, but went up and got Grand Theft Auto: Vice City. "Ill show you." She said deciding to leave the games for both of us to play for another time. She put the game in and turned on the Playstation. Not hearing anything she turned up the volume and watched the PlsyStation2 logo appear and sure enough there was the sound. She grabed the controller for it and sat down in my lab. Putting my hands on her shoulders and kissed her neck, hoping someone wouldn’t walk in at just the wrong time. The last thing I needed was to be chased out of the house by an angry father with a baseball bat. I leaned her back on me, feeling the burning tension between us, both our hearts beating faster together, almost able to feel hers, I smiled to myself. But that stopped in a second from the sound of gun shots from the T.V. watching her already get to with a shotgun.

She was really good. No matter what, the cops never got her. I was so happy. I really found someone. ME! I thought to myself. After a little more then two years, we had so much in common. Oh, she was so beautiful that night, just as every other night. An angel. I couldn’t help myself but to kiss her shoulder again, and then a second time. She paused the game and looked back at me with a grin and a little laugh, "Your not making this any easier you know." said to me with a smile. "I’m sorry." I said,” Your doing so well I thought you needed more of a challenge, so I was trying to distract you. She played for a while and then decided it was time to watch movies.

It was about 7seven Forty-Five and she got up and put in the movie, "Resident Evil." She’s never seen it before so I thought shed like it and we could watch it together, being it was one of my favorite movies. We watched that, Crank, One of the pirates moves, Harry potter, all sorts of stuff, as well as a few movies I just would pay attention too because by that time the lights where off, and she was in her pajamas. We're we sponning on the conch in a romantic fashion, and the very cent of her hair made me feel weak. I held her hand tight up at the alarm clock. By that time it read eleven 'O-clock P.M. It was just then that I noticed how cold it was, but how worm I felt. "Cold?" I asked her. "Nah, I'm alright" She said in her same cheerful voice. I smiled and rubed my foot agast hers, we were both wearing socks but I could still feel her feet where kinda cold. "Tough girl." I thought to myself. "You ask me that so you must be cold!” She exclaimed. I said,"Eh, it’s not so bad. She got up and got a worm blanket and layed back down with it, shiving by then, keeping us worm, and gentle giggled to myself feeling her shiver next to me under the blanket. Under our little cover, just the two of us where so worm, Holding hands, but out side that, the room was just freezing cold. I loved it, I never wanted to move. But sadly the end of the movie was coming and one of us would have to get up, so I did my best to thurlhy enjoy every second of that perfect time.

She looked up at the clock and griped my hand harder; knowing full well that by then her parents must have gone to sleep, seeing the Red numbers, "12:23" After another a few more minutes the movie came to an end watching the end credits come on the black screen. She started to get up, as I looked up at her and smiled thinking she was just going to put in another movie, She griping my hand harder just before she let go of me and I returned the hold. I looked up at her and she paused and looked down at me and smiled. "I just remeabed....I'm supposed to beat your ass in red faction!" I smiled and laughed sacrasticly,"You can try." I said with a confidant voice.

She said it was up in her room and that shed go get it, as she started walking for the door into the other room. Then I hurd the boom, boom, boom, or her running up the stares. I shut my eyes and started to think about her, and it was only a second before I began to smile and turn red. After some time I started to wonder what was keeping her, it must have been three or fourth minutes later. It was still freezing cold but I got myself up and started for the stairs. The stair way was so dark and quiet. I tried my best to get up the stairs as quietly as I could trying not to wake anyone up and almost stepped on the cat, being it was so dark. “Zoey-Ann!” I whispered out, “Move you crazy cat!” I was kind of proud of myself, other then the cat I made it up and to her door with out much of a peep. I whispered in the room,”Tori?! Something wrong was keeping ya?” I called out once more, a bit loader but also trying to keep quiet, so not to wake anyone. I remembered that the smallest noise could wake them, and turn into an hour of watching the X-files. Or some other T.V. show. I called out one last time before I hurd her voice from inside the room. ”Come in…I wanna show you something…”

Then the strangest things started t happen to me. For what almost seemed like no reason, I started feeling sick, my heart started to pound, speeding up, going faster and faster. “What’s the matter with me?” I thought to myself. The butterflys in my stomach going crazy. “Nothings going on, why do I feel so, nerves?” I thought turning the doorknob. My heart skipping a beat as I started to open to door.

It was then that I got it. My body almost seemed like it had a sixth sense. I saw her standing, with her back to me. It was dark in her room for the most part, only one light on, the lamp on the table in front of her. I could make out that she was now wearing a white sleeping gown, laced all over with beautiful designs. But as I watched her turn around to look at me I then saw it was the only thing she was wearing. Just wearing that gown, I could see every single little curve of her body. My heart was beating so fast, my head was all over the place, I thought I was going to pass out. I carefully studied her perfect body, each and every curve, her hips, her leg, her breasts. Looking at her cheast it was then that I noticed that some of the dress was see though; I did everything I could to keep my breathing steady. I looked her in the eyes and said it with my eyes to her as well as gently whispering it, “I love you.” I couldn’t begin to put into words everything I felt for her, everything I felt that night. I took a step and a step moving for her, and just as I reached half way to her she reached behind her a turned the knob clicking the light off.

She looked so beautiful in the moon light, watching her brush the hair off the right side of her face. I couldn’t help myself turning red, as she did the same simply stunned by the pure beauty of this angel standing before me. It took me a second to muster up the power to rest my hand on her side, on her hip loving the feeling, as we closed our eyes and sharded a powerful kiss. “You…Are so beautiful Tori.” I whispered in her ear. “I love you…So much” The kiss felt like forever, before letting go, and started kissing down her neck and her shoulder, loving how this is making her breath faster and faster.











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