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Into The Abyss

01:28 Jun 03 2008
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Into The Abyss

by Hawk O'Brian





To the edge,

Against the ledge,

I'm the victim of my crimes.



Soul restrained,

heart in chains,

how familiar the ties that bind.





I can't bend,

I've reached the end,

how did it all come to this?



Fatal blow,

just let me go,

and I'll fall into the abyss.





I pushed too far,

I'm cut and scarred,

and I've lost all I know.



This hollow disease,

I'm on my knees,

I've gone as far as I can go.





Hearing empty sounds,

I look down,

and nothing looks back at me.



Against the wall,

let me fall,

just please set me free.





Future's past...

is now outcast,

let's watch it fade and die.



What we seek...

goes dark n' bleak,

as we watch it all pass by.





Here comes the end of this....



Here I go into the abyss.....



With one more venomed kiss....



let me fall in the abyss.....

COMMENTS

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mechelle007
mechelle007
02:16 Jun 03 2008

This is an incredible poem. I love it. Great work Hawk.





sweetsedation
sweetsedation
21:30 Jun 13 2008

I like this poem a lot...

It makes me think of the very dark side of love.

The side that people don't usually see until it is too late.





SeducesU
SeducesU
02:35 Feb 09 2009

This is fucking awesome! I enjoyed it simply for the fact that everyone has experienced feeling like this at least once in their life...This is the life I crave for





VvvVampireKisses
VvvVampireKisses
07:15 Jun 01 2013

I relate to this poem.. I felt this one.. well written.. love it








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